Wow. A dysfunctional relationship if I ever saw any. This is fucked up on so many levels. Megatron's going to have a surprise when he realise who Starscream's supposedly 'dead' bondmate is... and Skyfire wont find it easy at all to try and reach out to his bondmate...

Oh my Primus I love this story so far! Skyfire is so right though. You dont give up and those you love.

Honestly your intro terrifies me, you both sound like a horror movie... I think I'm going to be in love

Starscream having issues with self-harm and using Megatron to get the pain makes /so/ damn much sense...

A very enjoyable read; I particularly liked how you wrote Skyfire's character in this, and the inclusion of Jazz and Thundercracker as different perspectives. Thank you for writing!

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Fantastic. I cried through half of it, probably because...yeah.

I need my own Skyfire, I guess.

One of the best things I have ever read.

I'm seriously crying. ;A; this fic is... Amazing. It gave me the thrills and chills at the same time (ooh look I rhymed *shot*). Fabulous job of using 1st person. It gave a deep insight into each character, and what I really liked was that the word choice differed between each character noticeably enough to distinguish them. I got a little disturbed reading the fic, but despite everything, I really liked that you ended the fic the way you did, with Starscream beginning his long journey of healing and not all suddenly fluff and slash with Skyfire. It seems way more realistic, and as I said, made me cry. The whole thing is so deep. And touching. And well-written. And I also liked how you twined it with canon. But most of all, I like this fic because it shows what noncon really is. Something dark and abusive, and not at all arousing. Brilliant job, overall. Yup. _

That last bit between TC and Skywarp made me tear up a little. ;u;

Wow.

This is just amazing. And the fact that this is totally told from 1st person POVs makes it even more powerful.

I don't believe I've ever read a story with such deep, startling power. The words seemed to flow on their own, also, switches in POV generally annoy me, and belittle any good story; except yours. Opening eyes and claiming hearts; if you should ever become an author please tell me your pen name, the style and heart gripping surreal yet so tantalizingly real way you depict each action... is beautiful. I can't bring myself to favorite this story, I have to read it again and again if I ever plan on truly understanding the meaning in each chapter. It's amazing that you can to some point relate to this. This is the greatest, realest, truest story I have ever crossed on this site.

Thank you for posting it,

Babblebuzz

Well, its been an absolutely wonderful roller-coaster ride of a story, and I'm ever so glad to have been able to read it~ Thats so much for bring it tp us, and sharing this beautiful piece of lore~

Koi

Yes~

Back on Track Decepticons! Back on track and save cybertron! 3

You are the one
you'll never be alone again
your more then in my head - your more

You are the one - Shiney Toy Guns

I think I'm drowning
Asphyxiated
I wanna break this spell
That you've created

You're something beautiful
A contradiction
I wanna play the game
I want the friction

You will be the of me
You will be the of me

Bury it
I won't let you bury it
I won't let you smother it
I won't let you it

Our time is running out
Our time is running out
You can't push it underground
You can't stop it screaming out

I wanted freedom
Bound and restricted
I tried to give you up
But I'm addicted

Now that you know I'm trapped sense of elation
You'd never dream of
Breaking this fixation

You will squeeze the life out of me

Bury it
I won't let you bury it
I won't let you smother it
I won't let you it

Our time is running out
Our time is running out
You can't push it underground
You can't stop it screaming out
How did it come to this?
Oh

You will suck the life out of me

Bury it
I won't let you bury it
I won't let you smother it
I won't let you it

Our time is running out
Our time is running out
You can't push it underground
You can't stop it screaming out
How did it come to this?

Who will save your soul when it comes to the flower
Who will save your soul after all the lies that you told, boy
Who will save your soul if you won't save your own?