! That's it just exclamation points.

devious haruka devious

xD I loved the story, it was hilarious and seductive!

Go Haruka for regaining your domanance! xD I love Michiru and Haruka, they're so great together.

This was some great Sailor Moon yuri, you should definitely write more!

Mm playful.

;]

nice.

heh.

*laughs* yes, Haruka...you took back your dominance XD. I hadn't been expecting a sequel to the first part but I like it. there aren't many fics lately which contain the things you write...usually we find a lot of drama between the two of them but I like the change..keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to more of your work

~ Amnesia Nymph

Damn that was Hot.

Som ice here please

Great story! The ending was the best part when Michiru said "Be gentle now, I'm fragile." I can imagine her little puppy dog face as she said that. :) I didn't really see Michiru as naughty until now. It was a different way to see her

Keep writing

Blaise Tenoh

*gasp*

That was HOT. Sounds like me and my ex when she and I were going out. She was my Michiru. _

now that's what i'm talking about. wonderful written story. there aren't many like these out here and certainly not with michiru in the more dominant role. i like seeing her in charge for once and haruka in a some what weaker state. keep the stories coming

sexy!

Very awesome! It was nice to see Michiru in control for a change. Keep up the good work!

very well written oneshot... very cute as well XD. It's nice to see Michiru as the somewhat dominant one...that's very rare but certainly not misplaced... I can't wait for more of your work and more stories like these...

Nice touch at the ending as well

~ Amnesia Nymph