i dont think ill ever stop crying

nice how you purposely made one of the kid's names "angel"

well that didn't make me tear up, so it wasn't all that sad.

The title attracted my attention
And i fell in love with this story 3

no offence but rather than use garra and hinata u could have made a whole new characters and used them and it been ur own as far as i can see u would have been fine doing that too

I really really loved the beginning. It was just wonderful. The story started to get confusing and very wordy near the middle and end but as you mentioned it's because you were trying to figure out where to go with it. But still I'm glad it was finished and the ending though sad and short was good. I loved the epilouge. Thankyou for shareing! _

I loved and enjoy reading every minute of it...at 1st I thought Hiashi was the demon(good job there)...but my heart was sadden when Gaara died...

This was a poetic story, i nearly cried at the end.

(I'm a wuss)

9/10

nine out of ten :)

Amazing story, but I can't help but laugh at the fact that chapter 5 is called Possesion but the first words say 'I don't own anything'

Favorite story loved it. Gaara/Hinata rule!

NARUTO ? Are you serious ? I surely didnt expect THAT! Honestly I know that Naruto have a demon but hes too bright.. its interesting to see him on the another side - dark and bad Naruto ;] Good job!

Oh strange but from the beginning I have the feeling that her master would be Sasuke.. hes just fitting perfect, the one I can think now,after this chapter Im sure of it! ;] Interesting!

I can't get over the sadness of this story. The ending never fails to make my heart twang. ;_;

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This is the first chapter that made me CRY!-sobs heavily- Y did u kill Gaara? It's so sad without very touching stories and I WILL be expecting a sequel on the kids lives!-bounds off to the cemetery to visit Gaara-