| Reviews for Run |
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bed of nails and sandpaper chapter 3 . 12/14/2008 wowee\! please write more! In don't think I've ever read a fiction quite like this one, and I'm really enjoying it. Update soon ] |
Sakura Scout chapter 3 . 7/5/2008 It's been a while since you updated, but I'm glad that you did. Yes, I very much like the plot and I can't wait to see what happens next. Just a guess, but is it Yamato and Mimi that came out unscathed? Oh! TAKERU MADE A CAMEO! But I'm a little perturbed by what Yamato said right before the flashback, it being a memory someone would more likely repress. I'm gonna make another guess and say it turns out to be pretty gruesome and a failure of a mission. It could also mean that this was event in which Yamato died. The real question that runs through my mind about this flashback is if Takeru died in that event or was saved by Yamato's final act before he died. Gosh. I hope Takeru is alive, my inner Takari fangirl demands it. Just a little something I noticed: There is a lot of mixing up 'he' and 'she.' It's not too bad, but it breaks the flow of the reading and will become a bigger problem should it arise in scenes that involve both genders. Still, I really like the story thus far and hope to read more soon. - |
lucid hallucinations chapter 2 . 5/1/2007 I absolutely love your story! It's so original! I definitely am adding this to my favourites! Keep up the great job! |
BloodySiren chapter 2 . 4/27/2007 ah hahahaha! this was so funny! i loved it though! u just HAD to start him out naked... |
Another Reviewer chapter 2 . 4/15/2007 This is a great story, I reckon. Hopefully, you would update soon, it depresses readers that it takes them ages to update or finish stories. |
MIMIATO chapter 2 . 4/15/2007 CUTENESS! Continue it soon! |
Achiri chapter 2 . 4/13/2007 Oi! This is also great! It kinda reminds me of Chobits, and dear I feel sympathy for Yamato too early! I wish you would update your stories especially S.A.G. sooner, for such good-no, stupendous stories, they have the right to be updated! Hehe, please update soon. |
HappyLAvida chapter 1 . 4/12/2007 THIS IS THE BEST FIC EVER¡ ADD TO FAVORITE¡ its original and diferent but thats why the fanfic is fantastic. Love the way that yama reacts whit mimi is just too cute and tender and the samll feling of jealous. its just so lovely. PLEASE CONTINUE¡ MIMATO 4 EVER¡ sayonara L.O.W-san¡ |
beth chapter 2 . 4/11/2007 ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT ! |
Caterina Sforza chapter 2 . 4/9/2007 omg i love it! it kicks ass! i am so glad tht youve posted a mimato story an this one is so cute! i absolutely adore it so update soon! i wouldnt mind being the beta for this one also so if ur interested just mail me! huggles~ lucifers angel6 |
ellah chapter 2 . 4/8/2007 this is really good so far. keep up the good work and update soon:) |
SuPeRGUIrl chapter 1 . 4/8/2007 continue it, please! LOL! |
islandgurl985 chapter 2 . 4/8/2007 I totally and completely love your story! The plot is unique and beyond different from the other Mimato fics that have been created lately. The theme of your story kinda-sorta reminds me of a manga, Absolute Boyfriend, except that the plot is almost entirely different. Please continue! |
pink-strawberries chapter 2 . 4/7/2007 i love your story, its so kawaii!...not to mention alot of future potential...u are totally my fav digimon author...ur storyies are so satisfying and realistic even when its AU!lolz |
Orchid Child chapter 1 . 4/7/2007 lol! that last part was funny! UPDATE SOON! |