Reviews for Shocking
Samthman chapter 4 . 5/9
Is you dead
waterdemon9 chapter 4 . 12/31/2015
Unique and awesome story
Dragon0905 chapter 4 . 5/22/2014
Dang it. I found another dead story that had a decent plot, writing style, AND knew how to spell.
Wolfone10 chapter 4 . 11/6/2012
Uh oh, Naruto's had his first tiny taste of the darkside... How will he cope? Also how will he take his first kill?.. those are usually the worst ones... Will Sasuke and Sakura help him to cope or will they turn from him in fear?... Well here is hoping you didn't abandon the story.
R00T Agent Sai chapter 4 . 7/30/2012
Awesome story can't wait for more
Dymian chapter 4 . 3/22/2012
*smiles* I like this... Thanks Kumo Nin... Your work will be honored.

Please mores?
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 2 . 11/24/2011
Well I was very, very interested in this story so far. Then I saw the main pairing as Tayuya/Naruto/FemHaku. I never have, and never will read a harem. EVER. That is why, this is where I leave the fic.

So good luck with this fic. It was pretty fun to read. I hope you do finish it cause I definitely did like these first two chapters.

-Chrono
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Just from the scroll I love Raiken already. Funny OC you got there.

-Chrono *grins*
Common Sense chapter 4 . 10/15/2011
I'm already starting on the next chapter, I swear! It's small, but it's really mostly fillerish :( but the good stuff is coming up! PLEASE NO LEAVE ME!

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WHAT IS THIS?

I TRUSTED YOU AND YOU DO THIS TO ME, GOD DAMNIT MAN!

Back2cutting.
Bazerkerking chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
cool
Inner demon66 chapter 4 . 6/11/2010
pretty kickass
ShadowGOUF chapter 4 . 5/13/2010
oh please oh please update this story I beg of you. I love it. it's awesome, cool, nice fight scenes, and naruto humor. please come back!
omally-dood chapter 4 . 2/18/2010
wow simply wow that was ...

AWESOME I CANT W8 4 MORE

please right more (big puppy dog eye's and quivering lip)

also i cant w8 2 see how he hooks up with tayuya
Zuviel Naazie chapter 4 . 2/8/2010
Sweet! Update and FAST!
MysticSea88 chapter 4 . 1/7/2010
Great storyline, why did you stop it though?
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