Oh gods.
I was so scared it was going to get worse

OMIGAWD! KAWAII! I loved that sooo much! Thanks 4 writing an aewsome story!

I just want to say that I loved this story! The best of it's kind, hardly suprising as you seemed to be the first one to have thought of this plot. Everyone was so in character, it was just brilliant.

I really enjoy reading this story every time.

SEQUEL SEQUEl SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!

!I think it may be a necessity to my happiness and all-around wellfare that I favourite this author and all of her stories! (fangirling uncontrollably) XD XD XD XD

!I think it may be a necessity to my happiness and all-around wellfare that I favourite this author and all of her stories! (fangirling uncontrollably) XD XD XD XD

cute

Awwwwww soo sweet :) well done, you are a brilliant writer!

LOVE IT!

This story is by far the best HaruhiXMori pairing I have ever read! I loved the plot and your metaphors were so flawlessly creative! It was very well done, I must say. You may want to look at a few grammar problems though, but everything else was fantastic, it was a very exciting read.

My eyes were threatening to make tears fall when I read about the part of Haruhi and Takashi at the bridge. Then, the tears did fall when I read the part about the Host Club watching them, while hiding. I'm not sure why I finally cried at that part, but I think its because the Host club saw them, and the Host Club does include Kyouya, and I think Kyouya also did have feelings for Haruhi, so... Yeah, I felt sad for Kyouya, that time. Anyway, nice story.

Ok that was dramatic rofl Go haruhi! You teach that boy a lesson lol awesome job!

Really, really liked the story. I think that it's now the third time I've read it :p

I'm glad the characters aren't that OOC so much.

Hope you will write another one with them!

very cute story, but i think the injuries were a bit too dramatic.