awwwwwwwwwwww
so happyyyyyyyyy
see good ending

this is perfect this is what i always wanted in a fic

As a spur-of-the-moment thing, I decided to start watching the Kanon 2006 anime yesterday. I got to around episode 15, and I finished watching the remaining episodes today. Makoto's arc... my god. After watching the utterly heart-wrenching conclusion of episode 10, I felt absolutely terrible. She suffered a fate that no-one deserves.
So I was relieved to see a chance for her story to recieve a happy ending. Thank you.

After bawling my eyes out when Makoto "Died," i needed to find a fanfic where she comes back. THank you.

Wow, this fanfic is really old. But the MakotoxYuichi Pairing has affected me more than AyuxYuixhi.

I think this was a heartwarming Kanon fanfic with an au-universe route. Maybe it's partly because I always had a soft spot for Makoto of all the girls there.

Another good thing was that you kept the characters pretty much in-character when depicting Yuichi and Makoto arguing or teasing each other, or when Yuichi interacts with the others.

Kohana was an interesting chacter for you to come up with, butI don't know about how early children learn to read, but considering Kohana's supernatural ancestry from her mother's side, she could have gained the skill to read. That or she's a very bright girl.

But there are some writing errors here and there in the chapters, like in some sentences where you write the wrong word or rare instances where you forgot to write a word that connected your sentence together. Hopefully this won't let you down.

Aww. So sweet...

omg Yay! I love Makoto!

This Fan Fic has to be my all time fave i keep coming back to read it Makoto and Yuuichi are awsome together But i like Ayu and Yuuichi the most

Great anime, Good plot, Nice ending alround awsome Fic goodjob

oh...u recreated amono, correct?

U made her reincarnation.

how nice, now everything is happy! as it should be!

Appaluse...clap...clap...

amono...so pretty ,so lovely.

well done...so, so pretty...

ohh...

*sulks in breath*

so very beautiful...so very...

lovely, truly, a vision.

gao...ano...i really, really liked it...it was really pretty. so kawaii...u.. ulike kanon right? its a good show...one of my favorites. and, i really hope this doesnt seem rude but, here goes. im making my very own kanon story, 'In his eyes', im not sure how it will turn out yet..im on my second chap, and was wondering if maybe u wanted to read it..perhaps even review if u like it. sorry. im just, u know. theres hardly any people on fanfic that even know about kanon, let alone write stories about it..so, ya...any kanon fans im wondering if they wanted to read it. gomen, i didn't really mean to make this review about me.

i like ur story, and i shall now read the next chappy.

Thank you! I am ecstatic of anything that has to do with the YuuichixMakoto pairing! Except for maybe hentai. To me, it's just ruining something so pure and heartwarming. Anyway, to the story. Interesting beginning. I can tell this is gonna be interesting and my fanatics about the Yuuichi and Makoto pairing serves only the enhance the experience of reading this even further. You definitely have my gratitude for typing this.

How did you get the Kanon game for ps2 in English?

I have to know!