| Reviews for Beyond Words |
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Overwatch147 chapter 1 . 2/16/2015 I loved it! Your an amazing author! |
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 4/21/2014 The ending was cute, great job. |
Margo352 chapter 1 . 2/21/2014 Awwww : ) |
Little Gem Magnolia chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 sweet! i loved it! ;) |
Toriano.Flacko chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 aww... what? not my problem... huh? okay, shutting up now. nice fic. I said shutting up now already, didn't I? okay, shutting up now. |
98765432111 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008 aww! another great oneshot. i love bbrae. yay you! |
Little Miss Juliet chapter 1 . 12/23/2007 Cute. Heart it! |
titanfan45 chapter 1 . 12/13/2007 You can never go wrong with good Beastboy and raven fluff. Excellent. |
Marlicat chapter 1 . 12/1/2007 Aw. |
A Pair of New Shoes chapter 1 . 4/30/2007 Great story, my dear. Keep up the good work. |
ItCame chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 really good, please continue |
Arcaten chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 "It was one of those moments where one line from the lyrics just pops out at you and you just go with it." -I completely agree with this statement, it couldn't be more true. |
Lorendiac chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 I liked it! Just reading your summary, before I even clicked to look at the actual story, I started thinking of one of my favorite Frank Sinatra songs. The key line is repeated several times throughout the song: "And then I go and spoil it all by saying something stupid like 'I love you.'" I've always loved that song. (I don't know if it's the same one you were listening to on CD when you got the inspiration for this story, but it could have been. If not, then it must have been something with a similar theme.) With that in mind, I particularly liked the way Beast Boy was banging his head against the wall as he decided he'd totally blown it. Perfectly in keeping with the theme of the song I remember (except that you give them hope for a happy ending here, which the original song didn't even hint at, near as I can recall). Now, in keeping with the tendencies that give me a proud reputation as a Shameless Nitpicker, I'll point out one thing that struck me as an awkward choice of words. * The words came too slowly coming from her mouth, but there, she had said it. * "Came too slowly coming" feels a bit redundant. Do you really need to use different forms of the same verb twice in a row? |
liloaprilz chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 AW, SO CUTE! GREAT WORK, YOU'VE GOT RAVEN AND BEAST BOY'S CHARACTER DOWN PACT. :) TOO SWEET FOR WORDS, I LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE! KEEP IT UP! pLEASE DON'T REPLY TO THIS REVIEW, EXPLANAITONS ARE ON MY PROFILE. tHANKS, bYE! |
timkhj chapter 1 . 4/5/2007 Sweet story. Very nicely done! |