Reviews for Spread Your Wings
Veronica McClure chapter 17 . 6/26
Well. I guess the way you've written this Harry, and his friends, the next Archangel ascension will either be himself, or the "angel" he's falling in love with: Luna, or one of their teachers at Atlantis. Hope I get to see this story complete, even if you have to totally rewrite it to get it back into your headspace. I loved this story when I first read it, I have every minute I could allow for re reading it . But I really want to see you come to it even if; like I said before, you find you must re write to work on it again. You just left too many tantalizing glimpses of the things that are due to happen to cause Harry and Luna and their Atlantis friends to meet up with certain Hogwarts students.
There's surely going to be a reaction when they see Harry and his Atlantis friends have a better grasp on. their magic and what they can do with it than the Hogwarts contingent.

Maybe have Harry and Orlando "report for duty" as University level tutors for Hermione to be able take her tests for entering University. And the misunderstanding can result from Hermione and her parents assuming that the tutors are University age, and they get 14 going on 15-year-olds. Or hijinks can happen when Sirius and Harry visit the British Goblins' new Statuary Hall in their lobby as per their invitation.
Veronica McClure chapter 18 . 6/25
I'll be looking for your updates when you're ready. Hopefully you were able to carve some time out for finishing it or rewriting if you found you had to after all this time.
Veronica McClure chapter 16 . 6/24
*liquidated* not *liquified* in terms of property needing to be sold fast.
Veronica McClure chapter 15 . 6/24
And the Roman Catholics teach their children that October 31st is All Souls day, while November 1st is All Saints Day.
Veronica McClure chapter 16 . 6/23
"Sirius Black was set free and reunited with his Godfather." ?
Veronica McClure chapter 14 . 6/23
I know one thing Snape shouldn't die just because of either his first name (which incidentally was a Roman General/Ruler's Surname) or because of his Dark Brand/ tattoo. When you think about it, he only joined because he lost Lily's friendship, and didn't really care anything except having a sense of belonging, and didn't have the same ideas as Riddle or the other DE's.
Veronica McClure chapter 15 . 6/23
I have a theory about that: Lockhart 's books hadn't been selling at all, so when he was given the job at Hogwarts, he came up with making not just one, but all his books required reading. If I was one of those magical parents, I would've just bought the one that was Lockhart 's "bio" which was most certainly a rehash of his other books anyway, then bought my kid what would've been the defense text for their year, and told them to study that between the pages of the charlatan 's bio.
Veronica McClure chapter 12 . 6/22
Basically giving Atlantis Students the schedule that College /University students have.?

So Harry Harry's New focus will fit out for settling down later in his and Luna 's life in one of three places: New Mexico, Arizona, or Australia.
Veronica McClure chapter 11 . 6/22
What would have happened if the magic of the wand meeting Harry's magic in Olivander's, had driven the horcrux piece out of his scar in the beginning?
Veronica McClure chapter 11 . 5/21
Wonder what would've happened to the Tom Riddle possessed Quirrel if Hogwarts had used the cleansing rite of the Beltane Bonfire?
Dagondawn chapter 18 . 4/27
Are you even going to update this story cause I really liked it a lot and would truly like to know what happens next!
Veronica McClure chapter 18 . 4/24
"picnic" as you can see, does not have any "ks in it.
R chapter 11 . 1/20
A hair clasp?

Come on... thats lame. :(
Lendor chapter 9 . 4/6/2019
I love the plot of your story.
It is well developed and very interesting.
I would encourage you to try and show your story instead of telling it so much. You could try using more dialog to accomplish this. For example, write out a conversation between Harry and his friends instead of just telling about how he learned from Orlando about the influx of American outsiders.
Well thought out story.
I look forward to reading more.
- Lendor
Guest chapter 18 . 11/11/2017
Can Neville just be the new archangel? I'd actually die from happiness :')
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