:3c That chapter title there doesn't happen to have anything to do with the Five Stages of Grief, eh? If it did, I would worship you. I love seeing references I actually understand. XD

You write like, "Whoa, that's lovely." It's very eloquent, very clear - fun to read, really! And that characterization? Amazing. Spot-on. I wish this hadn't died... It would have been awesome to see how everything rolled out.

Adam, dear. Your addiction to cigarettes is pretty goddamn intense.

Well! Ignoring the unlikeliness of such an act, I'll subscribe to this and hope that you get back up on your feet.

Awesome two-shot! Your characterization is spot on and completely believable! I like that you didn't make Adam some sniveling, pathetic idiot. Obviously he is damaged, but I liked the subtlty in which you portrayed it!

You're a great author! Nice work! :)

OMG! Please continue, please, pretty pulease! Fine Again become my personal soundtrack for AdamxLawrence now! I can't stop listen this music! It's so your fault!

In a sad way, Adam is sort of funny when he's drunk... But still sad. I feel bad for him. Bud this story has potentials through the roof! Update soon!

DAMN YOU, MORNING! Another story I have to wait for you to finish... _

Anyway, update soon.

Please continue soon! I love your work.

I don't mean to be pressing, I am really just in love with this new take on the story, but are you planning on finishing or is this fic dead?

Wow. This story is amazing so far. I look forward to future chapters!

Next chapter! Soon! Come on! Don't make me suffer too long!

Oh, dear. Drunk Adam. XD

You wrote him REALLY well. And this line - "By the time he makes it to his living room he can’t remember if he has a reason for being here or if he’s just looking for a place to pass out" - that's SO relatable and true. *grin* "Fine Again" is an awesome song, too!

Great job!

I love your characterization! It's so perfect. I understand why you like this story better than your old one. I'm so excited to see what this all leads to.

Drunk beyond all recognition Adam is quite amusing, and sounding quite like my uncle.. Anyway, Your fics are awesome and I look forward to reading more from you.

-read this entire chapter in biology- Gotta stop doing that... xD

Ohmigosh...You're writing another one. *cheers*

I adore you, and your writing. And reading this is amazing, it's so different from the other stories of yours that I've read. I love it! I'm very glad to be here at the beginning of this one. Looking forward to more. Thanks!

Wow, so much blacker than the previous one. Brilliant. Keep up the black humour and you'll have an entirely new audience to play with. :)

More wonderful Saw-ness! I love your Saw stories so much, you always get Adam and Lawrence down perfectly!

Haha here's the next chapter:

"Adam dies of lung cancer."

I loved your last story! But I know how you feel about hating it. It seems like as soon as you finish something its like UGH WHY? It was great, though, even if you don't think so.