So Cute! Rain always seems to have cuteness, or is that just my opinion. Oh Well, cute story. Keep writing.

Fantasy Fan Girl

Veru cute :)! And I think the story survived without a proofread - I couldn't see any mistakes.

Nice chappie.

still pretty good... cute and sweet XP

-sigh- i had to make the 10th review again -_-"

Aw! So kawaii! I loved it! It may have been 3 AM but you did a very job! Aside fro the few spelling mistakes, but thats understandable ;) Keep up the good work!

This was so kawaii! Thank you so much!

Unheard

lol sweetness lots of fluff yay!

wow.. Great job.. it's kind of touching.. lolz.. it's good to imagine or picture them like that.. it's very very cute.. keep it up.. it's well written, actually.. i like how you portrayed their characters in this.. ja.!

Erinn~

Really cute. Especially how...teenagerish...they act. What with the squabbling and all. It's adorable! For no proofing, there are very few grammar mistakes. This one thinks you may have dropped a few periods, but that's okay. 3 AM writing usually doesn't turn out this good. Thanks much for sharing!

-The Siacatmesecat

Awwe! that was so cute and sweet! great job!

Hee hee - I'm usually not too interested in Riza and Roy pairings but this was a very sweet fic and I do actually like it :3

Very touching - keep up the good work!

~Ryopon~

AW! How cUte!

Honestly I couldn't tell that you didn't proofread so good job on that. I really liked the story, it was just so cute and sweet and lovable so great job )