lol, Ron

Your writing style is so fluid and naturally very well written, but the way you portray Harry and Hermione I think is off, they're too cheery. Still, I enjoy your work, great chapter~~

Your Ron is fucking hilarious, I adore him haha

Very daring story.
Voldy exploded like a balloon.
Ron is a jerk
Interesting rituals.
Kira

Great story. Good to see that you can write tasteful lovemaking scenes. Again a shame that you seem to have ceased writing so long ago.

If there is one fault in your stories, you portray Harry and Hermione as far too Puritanical for the age.

Cute

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this with us. Worth a re-read.

Still think you did a great job.

Great start. Perfectly believable.

Another great story! Thank you. I really like the H/H stories as I never understood how R/H ended up together in canon. The fighting they did had the potential to turn very abusive down the line and as a survivor with children of my own now I didn’t want my kids, especially my daughter, to think that was how relationships worked.

~Beth

They married

I thought I wouldn't finish reading this because although I do not oppose Harry/Hermione and think they are way more compatible than her being with Ron, I am not really interested in reading about all those steamy scenes and that unresolved sexual tension with lots of fluff and feelings involved. Yet I am still here, reviewing the last chapter. I have always prefered to review a story after reading the last chapter.

Anyway, I think what kept me going 'til the end was your writing style and how well you captured Harry and Hermione's feelings. It felt natural and not rushed, and the 4 chapters were rather like episodes to a TV show or something. It might sound weird I know, but that's what I thought of while reading this story. And I really, really liked it! :')

Interesting concept.

Just reading the beginning of this chapter reminded me so much of the movie Police Academy. In you post fic A/N you asked a very stupid question. Read the sex scenes from megamatt09 in Emerald Flight Book One or Ascension Book One. Both have very explicit sex in them. I think it safe to say all his stories are like that. Also there's another story where Harry blows Volditwitle's head off. Don't Knock On Death's Door where Harry works extremely hard to get Voldemort so mad at him that the Dark Lord kills the Dursley's for him. It starts out with him pranking the Dark Lord alone only to be found out by Hermi0ne and Luna. Naturally they want in on it and it snowballs form there. In the end Harry walks up disguised as a handyman, ring the doorbell and when Voldemort open the door and lets his guard down, Harry says Reducto while pointing his wand at Volditwitle's head.