Why do you keep casting darkness over my otp?! ;-;

love youer oneshot loseing shino

and that is just plain sad...

thats a whole new concept to the ShinoKiba thing. I've never read anything like that. I find that slightly depressing. I never looked at it like that.

Good job. I really indeed liked this one.

Ah, I forgot to see if there was a sequel. How stupid of me. So happy i ventured forth again. Thanks!

im about to cry right now ]:

this and the other story almost had me in tears x.x

u have a way with words i must say

aw, that is so sad...

Oh my gosh! I read both of them (saw god cry), and they're really well wirtten and sad! I love how in the other one Kiba keeps reminding himself that Shino isn't a boy but a man, and the last sentence in tihs one about loosing Shino to Shino before loosing him to the bugs was really sweet. So sad!

...omgosh...THAT IS SO SAD! WAH! :'( Really well written...but so sad! :'( :'( :'( :'( I'm actually cying as I type this up! Ow! Tears...bluring...vision! Can't...see...keyboard! NO! Newayz, yeah, it's really good. And a little depressing...but good! :') :'( :')

This was really sweet. It was also short so it didn't get that 'over and over and over' kind of annoying appeal that some depressing fanfictions (or writing at all) can get. Scary to think of that being the way Shino would die though. Not like I can claim any different with what happened in my story.

Saying 'Update' would be stupid but I am going to say that this is going on my Favorites and I'm off to check out more work!

That was beautiful, I love the way you picture Shino and the little curse you threw in there. You are a skilled writer and I hope to see more from you soon. :3

aw. This was great. I'm not even a huge KibaXShino shipper, but this fic is awesome!

Great job.

I don't even like this pairing, but I loved this fic! It had such a nice flow to it and it was believable! MAD PROPS GO TO YOU!

~OneWord