Holy crow! You wrote this the same year I was born! I actually was able to see Revenge of the Sith in theaters but I was still I little too young to fully remember it. All I remember is telling my dad I had to pee in the middle of the Mustafar battle and lava was all over the place. My dad, who took me to see it was, not pleased in the slightest. He still scowls about it! XD

This was an amazing rewrite... Great job

Are you going to rewrite all of the Force Bond story

This is an excellent story and I am very glad to be reading this! The characterization is fantastic, and I love your writing style! Thank You for writing this!

This is a good story and I like it a lot. It is very interesting and well-written. Thank You for writing this!

An interesting premise. I like how you realistically portrayed that witnessing a murder can cause a child to lose his ability to speak and I do like it that Palpatine isn't omniscient here though I find that a bit hard to believe. That man has always been one step ahead of everyone. Nevertheless, it's a wonderful start to a awesome series. :D

This is maybe the 5 th fanfic I've read for sw. I must say that this story had me, from beginning to end, constantly needing to know what happened next. Very well written and organized. Mad kudos to you, writer. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you!

awwww Luke socializes with a Stormtrooper! that, I have never seen in a fanfic

Vader with ruthless carnivorous pets is the best thing ever. plus they are freaking father and son, likewise to Vader and Luke. awesome.

And there we go. Poor Ben...

I feel sorry for Tis but at the same time NO

I am tempted to bash my head against the wall

That's not what that bastard said on Tattoine.

Oh fuck did Obi-wan die?!

Oh this is gonna get ugly