A really wonderful story.

Omg I cantttt

I have to say this is really go work

That last part was hilarious, the rest so cute and fluffy! Looking forward to more!

Meh, Shimon will get over it. I did feel bad for Isis though. She didn' t do anything against them really or use anybody. Not like that bitch Anzu. I say this should be a multi ch, and see what really happens after. And that Isis shoukd find her true love too!
Anyways cute one-shot! /

So adorable! Thanks for this cute fic!

Liked it?! LOVED IT _

This was absolutely beautiful! I am so glad atem took Yugi as his lover instead of pleasure slave, Yugi deserved it.

The lemon was amazing and breath taking, great job! I loved every second!

Screw cliches, this is hilarious! XD

brittney

Finally! I found a writer who can write a good ygo story. I have reading some and was 'ugh can no one write a good ygo story?' then I found yours. It was great. You are one of the few great writers I've seen in a long time. Wonderful story. Love it.

puffin

Love the story. Hope you'll update the story... ASAP!

PERFECT! I LOVED IT! VERY GOOD!

Kiss ;*

Feer

I- -snickers- I'm laughing so much at the ending. That is the first ever Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic I have read and hell that was good! I'm gonna go read more of your stuff now, but thanks! I think that has me hooked now. xD

-BC

This fic was really good and, despite the sex scene, pure. I really loved the ending when Jou screamed in victory. i can see him holding up a 'V' for

oh boy...

will there be more to this story?