it's actually spelt "sannin", unless you mean that there are xianxia-tier immortals mucking about.

And Anbu arriving so fast eventhough only three ships travel each year. Oddly convenient. And the village paying for such expensive tickets when the idea Naruto could have washed up there and alive is ridiculous.

Uhh yeah this makes no sense. First the notion about the vast ocean between the elemental nation and miliky galaxy whatever. How only three ships cross it each year with very expensive fares. How milky whatever people have no Intel about the Ninja world besides tales from centuries ago. How there are clans that are considered extinct by the elemental nations. And then within two weeks of his arrival suddenly Konoha min show up and find Naruto?! How would they get the news about a relatively minor guy like Naruto in this remote place? Naruto is known for toad summons. If they read of a fox summoner they would discard the possibility that its Naruto. In the first place why would anybody think he got could survive being drifted across an entire ocean being mortally wounded and unconscious?! That's impossible even for Naruto. I doubt he could cross it even if he was at full health. His summoning contract with the toads was disrupted everything pointed to his death.

Naruto's reserves are too small here. Only thing he used were a chakra claw, hair senbon, shadow clones and one rasengan. However as an Utzumaki he is still a freak. Look at Nagato for example. Even Kakashi with hiss pitiful reserves manages more than what Naruto has in this fight

The writing is good though and ultimately I don't care about the genre or chara preferences because good writing is scarce on fanfic dot net

This first chapter has drawn me in. Kakashi was so OoC and did it so ruthlessly that I had to chuckle. The tearjerkers are over the top but that makes it funny though I'm not sure it is intended. I appreciate the lack of fluff.

Some idiots forget that after the fight of Naruto and gaara he ended up being more recognized, you are one of them.

And Kakashi is alive... right, now as if tsunade would leave him alive after that

Hmm, damn good story so far hope more will come soon anyways keep up the great work!

if this becomes garra x hinita I will stop reading right now

Just got down to the bottom of the page...and it's a big fat NOPE. You're either on drugs or you need to be!

Nice Gaara and Hinata is a ship that I don't see very often, then there is Naruto and him becoming the opposite of what was in Konha. Instead, of parents telling their kids bad things about him there he is a hero

That is a new level of talent in taking care of children.

lit

Been a while since the last update I see. Any plans to do so soon?

Plz continue this!