Reviews for Repetition
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2014
Sad but beautiful
LuceyLacie chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
And sometimes even though we aren't ANBU we're not supposed to know that it does hurt, that it's like knives stabbing our heart or blades cutting our skin because we have to stand tall, even though all you want to do is crumble to the floor any moment.
This is beautiful. Amazing. Exhilarating. Heart-clenching. And painfully true in some aspects.
I love this. Like love love love love this. I can relate a bit, though not in the means of being a ninja but in the means of pretending to not know what it is to hurt, to cry. I cannot fathom how much this speaks to me on an emotional level. Of course, it also features Kakashi which is plus points for me even though this is a bit depressing. But plus points for Kakashi nonetheless. I feel for this. So much. For writing this, I thank you.
It is true, repetition is an ugly thing.
Ciao.
leahpeahhh chapter 1 . 4/26/2014
wow, that was deep.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Tears!
cielchat chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
:'(

Sad. At least they are together, unless Sasuke goes to hell. Love the ending!
xWrittenInBlood chapter 1 . 2/4/2011
Wow. This is amazing. I love the tragedy, the team 7 love. Everything.
Venus914 chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Oh...i hurt for them.

Is the bond so strong that not even years, distance and betrayal tore them apart?
smileyfacebabe chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
AW! This is so ncredbly sad! I love it, poor Kakashi. You did an awesome job, way to go ;)

Take care!
true self writer chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
It is REALLY good made me cry!
Erendhyl chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
That one was sad too. TT At least they died together. I hope they get a happier ending though, because they deserve it. Great story.
Unsawr chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
If this was the product of 10 minutes ... I'd really like to see what comes out of an hour (or more).

'Cause this was absolutely amazing.

And if repetition really is an ugly thing, then it's ugly enough to make this beautiful (does that even make sense, eh whatever). All in all, you just made it work. As always.

I like how some of the things said in the beginning were warped into the end, e.g: the memorial/words.

But the part I really liked was when Kakashi found them again. And how they are once again together, but not quite ...

This was such an artistic piece, almost like a poem except in a more-physical story form.
Anon E. Mouse chapter 1 . 9/7/2008
Aaw..I was already teary, and you made me cry. *sniffles*
Cheerleader16 chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
i started crying.
Okuyukashii chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
That is so sad, but it's a good story. Great job!
PiscesHateScorpios chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
sad... my angst of the day!

well done!

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