I swear when you made her throw the knife, I was, WHAT THE HELL

Cool! I like it. Bye.:)

so, i've been reading your story and well I'm not trying to be mean with this but...

In my opinion you could have done a hell of a lot better. I know in the beginning you mentioned the characters may be out of character, but oh my god, they're were so many moments that had me going "does she even know the character?". It was sometimes that bad. Like I said before, I don't want to be mean. I want to try to help you so you can improve your writing. Some of the things you had Sanji doing, he would never do to a girl! The way you potrayed Robin was kind of out of character as well, along with a few others.

Not only that your character Memir had some Mary Sue-ish traits that usaully turn off readers, and well I'm surprised no one mentioned any of this in the reviews I read (I didn't read all of them so I don't know). But being able to choke Zoro? Ehh... I'm not saying it's not posible, but I mean come on..

I just wanted to point some of the things I noticed out. But like I said, you could have done a lot better with this story.

-Jess Likes Biting

I just loved your story and I hope that you write more like it!

NICE!

I honestly liked it, wow, I said something honest, that's the first today! Yay for me! Hopes for an update!

A possessed Nami is a nice touch, and the Memir's attitude toward other people. Your story gets better as it gets longer. SO I look forward to many more chapters, keep up the good work!

So..is it done? This story, I mean...but, it's so good! TT_TT

Aww...well. I'll move on. Maybe. Sequal!

Signed R.H.

He was so getting his moves on, why'd she go and ruin it! She knows she wants him, dang girl. Lol I found this chapter amuseing but I'm finding everything amusing right now...keep up the good work! God bless.

Please Update I'm LOVING THIS!

Good, I'm hoping for this! Sanji! Gotta love the guy. Hope Namis' okay!

Signed R.H.

He so called her fat. Mwhaha, you took awhile this time, anywho update as soon as your ready.

i wounder what her fear is HM!_!

“Sleep wherever you want, I'll be in that tree.” she pointed to the window and the branches scratching against the glass.

Ahahahah! Poor Sanji, he tries so hard...this is once again, an aweseome story, please keep it up! -beg beg beg beg- Hows' that? X

Signed R.H.

Yay. Memir found lurve. I wanna see what happens when she meet the ghost of her friend whos name escapes me right now;)