LOL, that last chapter was hilarious, good work.

awws cute i love the whole story it was a great transition and hope your friend Gabbi got better

It was good but i liked the end the most

the cancer thing is a little random and kind of takes away from the original plot

very nicely written, i would have gone with the loving, lets talk it out father but nice writing none the less

man i was hoping oliver would have just ignored his mom and went to find lily, would have been a sweet gesture, awesome writing tho!

kinda sad...my mom has cancer too...she's in remission tho...this is good...its like midnite n as i read this im trying not to laugh cuz itll wake every1 up lol...well I gotta go put some aloe on my legs, then I'm going to bed cuz i gotta wake up early to go to DC

love this story!1

reli luved it! sad that i only discovered it once it was finished! but oh well, i still have a sequel to read!

Hi, I just started reading this story and I wanted to post a review even though the story is finished! Just wanted to say that your story is amazing and finals do suck...

Good ending. you really did put alot in this fic. I'm happy I gave this to you. anyway it was well written and good job. I'll check out your sequel to this.

I can't wait for the sequel! Loved the story! So cute!

awesome story, creative chapter, lol.

Loved it alot. I added you to my fave authors...i diwd right?

lol i think i did. You have major talent.

I wish i was as good as you :]

LOL! Loved it! So funny! I can't wait for the sequel!~!

this was very entertaining