This is actually one of the more interesting Kim/Tommy fics I've read. Poor Kim has to deal with her bad eyesight and being a target. Nice job.

Awesome post more pwease

This wasn't all that bad a story. A little confusing at times, but overall pretty good. The re-imagining of Mesogog's origin was pretty cool, and giving Kim a somewhat realistic limitation throughout the story was a nice touch. Interesting how you managed to factor in the changes in Conner's social life, what with the idea of a new set of friends conflicting with his old friends. I've contemplated how such a thing would play out, but you added something of a depth to it that I'm unsure I could do.

Highly enjoyable, though.

well seems chap 11 is in error state so i can't continue this for the time being. i really wish i could im really liking it

im enjoying the stories so far i have added you to my favs as you write 2 of my fav fictions and i agree with your pairings for both hp and pr h&h should of happened and K &T is the only way. i know

Nice. Only one problem with the story: you had three different principals: Randall, Merchant, Meisner, and never explained what happened to the other. Other than that, awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.

This was a interesting story and take on the whole Dino Thunder idea. However I do have one minor question it seems you skipped over what happened to Kim's vision though I assume it didn't improve but nothing was really said either way

this whole story was absoulutely wonderful!

so far i love your story...it is a nice alternative to how PRDT started out. i love how you have gently eased the story and the gems thing along...

i can't wait to read the rest of it.

Wow that's all I can say,

I wasn,t sure when i started to read this one if i was going to like it. I guess after all I did, but though I had al ittle bit of trouble understanding the ending. How come the death of Tommy's mtoher affect everything and all. Think you can enlighten me with this. Also I owuld have love to see Ben excuses himself and all. Besides that, it was a wonderful story and well all good things chave to come to an ending

-Warstock

Excellent! Very well written! I loved the story!

cool ending

This was a really great story. Through and through, this really was great. I loved every chapter. :) Awesome job! Looking forward in seeing more of your work.

Wow didn't see that coming, interesting theory, Good chapter!

I'm SO SHOCKED nobody beat Ben up. I mean Tommy held his temper pretty well. No black eye, no bloody nose, no broken bones. He got off too easy. But he hasn't really felt the wrath of Kim. I hope Kim gets to give him a piece of her mind one last time.