nO FRIEND NO DONT END THE FIC THERE NO NO NO NO NOOOOO ;;

This is awesome. I love it. I really want to know what Light's answer will be. Can't wait to read more. Update soon?

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whatthe...

so fast and aggressive of Ryuuzaki...

Good job...

Update..

:)

More. Now.

Please?

Aw leave it on a cliffy!

Please update soon 3

Lovelovelove.

LustAndVengeance

Interesting -clicks next chapter-

AH! that was so great, now i really really really really *10 wanna know what light will say... ]

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err? oro? _ is this about to get rated? _ haha. UPDATE! I want to see what's next! I really love your style. And what's L doing, spending Christmas alone? Is he sure he doesn't want my company? _ Hehe. Update!

I guess this must be my favorite chapter yet! :) So the vacation was indeed extended! Cheers! And I love Light's reactions, and how Ryuuzaki... is egging him on. (I got the joke on the reaction paper, too! _ Thank goodness we're over that chapter of our life!) Husband and wife?...I was really laughing over almost everything. Be quick on the update!

Haha.. I love the banter of movies...

my 4th consecutive review _ it's getting better.. I just knew Misalike annoying female creatures abound everywhere... and I loved the part where Raito wonders how many "damn" times he has to keep arguing his innocence... haahaa...

I loved that part about L having a happy monologue about sugar...

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Really, all this talk about not knowing how to date and meeting other girls is probably just L's alibi to get Light to go out with him... :)

It has its really funny parts reminiscent of the author :) I'll be watching out for more updates..

Wow. If Light earned a dollar for every time he forced a smile at L...

He could start donating to my bank account! :) _ Hehehe.

I loved the picture of L by the moonlight.. So L's a bad singer, eh? Tis okay! At least he sings!

I bet that's just another of his ways to determine Raito's chances of being Kira..

Keep this up!

Haha! This was really cute! Talk about*silky trumpet blare, if that's possible* ...tension... haha! I love fanfictions that deal with what could have happened while/if Light and L weren't wasting their lives being Kira. And chasing Kira, respectively. I love that you put them in one house! I love- Ahem. I like that part where L sweeps a lollipop from his pocket, I can almost remember Kousuke in Spiral telling Eyes-kun, "Is your pocket a magic pocket?" for those sardines.

Anyways, I'm really interested in how this fic will go on! Make that Souichirou Yagami's and the other detectives' hiatus a MONTH! I mean, who wouldn't want to spend their vacation in a house with L? :) I wish! :) I could almost put up with having Yagami Light in the couch...

Keep this up! _

O...Inner Tension...I can't wait for more! Great work on this last chapter!