sososo cute I love it

karasu-love! :))

please write a sequel

Can’t we disgust this in our apartment

I think this needs to be discuss

*cries*

so. damn. cute!

omgg! please continue the story, please! its so good and you rarely see someone write about a child in iruka and kakashi's life

I like it alot

What a lovely story. It was so cute I wanted to squeal the whole time reading it. I liked the concept of Kakashi not getting Iruka pregnant, but instead getting someone else pregnant. Nice going.

Maybe you should write a sequel. I would really like to read about Karasu and Toka.

OMG! I LOVED IT! It Karasu is so KAWAII! I love the whole red hairpin thing and matching him with Toka was clever and, and, and,... I got happy butterflies swirling around me! _!

I adore Karasu. he's just so sweet and if you ever do that picture of him and Toka PLEASE let me know where it is.

I loved the play of kakashi vs mini-kakashi for the Iruka's attention prize and how playful you always kept it.

Later

Saint

ah i thought you could have done it a lot better. I mean it's okay, but no more than that really. You could have made it much funnier (I know from the first chapter that you could have) keep writing though because you do have really good moments.

I like it. it has a certain plot line that makes it impossible to stop reading and then stop wondering what might happen next. Please continue to write, please .

Awe... soo sweet Though the boy (I know he it 8) seem a bit to grown up. But I really really think you should update!

Please don't delete this it's very good and i'm glad your considering making this a two-shot _

I like it.

aww this is a good start I want to see what happens. Please continue soon.