I'm hoping for auto-reflect...

You screwed this story by having Harry obviated. I stopped reading because of it. Im sure you dont care. It was one of the best I have read till you did that. The power of the mind he had would not have been beaten that easily.

I've played the first bit of 8 but I can never get past the Ifrit challange...which yea is pathetic. But I've also seen some of my dad's many play throughs (Altho when 10 came out he moved onto that) of it so I kinda know the basics

Your idea for this book is good and sometimes well thought out but some things that you have happen just don't make sense and the explanation is kinda choppy at best it like hey I'm the author and this is going to happen no matter what because I want it to wether it make any sense or not while that is not bad in it's self it make for hard to swallow reading your explanation even if it's completely BS needs more thought in it
An example would be when Dumbledore used a vision to see where Harry went and all of a sudden because of that the time ratio is now 1-1 a better explanation would be that over time because of Harry being thier was causing the dimensions to pull closer together that would have made better sense to me

Well, I was kind of enjoying this, but just noticed that not all of the sequels are completed or written, so before I get too mad at Snape and Dumbles, I’m going to move on to something else.

hmmm not really the reaction your expect from someone who discovered they got their memory almost wiped, he should at least be pissed but it seems he simply accepted it

The obliviation has totally ruined the story for me. I put up with 7 chapters of weird stuff i could hardly follow, looking forward to all that stuff impacting the wizarding world and what do you do? Throw it all out the window on the first day in hogwarts! Now it's just like so many other HP stories: Rowling's first year word for word, action for action with a very slight twist. I thought this was going to be different! I give up!

I did not enjoy reading whole paragraphs lifted unchanged from Rowling's original. Completely boring.

Dumbledore is a complete idiot. Harry has been away for years; D thinks harry is ten years old; you don't leave a child alone without sorting out where they will stay so he should have taken harry to his relatives (thank heavens he didn't, but still!) or a hotel or mrs figg.

Well... Voldy and Dumby are going to regret it.

Cool chapter.

Oh, cliffhanger, dammit!

Oh, dear. Hogwarts's going to be FUN.

The World is going to learn that Harry's not the same Harry anymore...

This is getting more and more interesting!