Are you still on this site? This is a nice version of the EVA story. Would you ever return to it? Please...

I hold hope that this will continue one day

First saw this Fic over on Darkscribes and am happy to see you finished chapters six and seven. Great story and sincerely hope for an update.

A worthy read, deserving of a continuation and a fine ending.

Just read it from chapter 1 to 7. I enjoyed your multiple and changed character POVs and look at the military structure inside of nerv.

It has been a while since you updated... but I can always hope for more _

personally I think you should of made shinji permanently mute. I mean just how I think so awesome that would be writing in the no patter try to communicate with gesters and eye movements alone it is sorta like what rei does. tried to update the story soon.

I've always loved the idea of hearing stories from the view of the "regular" characters. Or at least, as in this case, remembers them.

I also like the little changes you've made that seem to make more sense than the original. Such as Shinji being unable to talk for one.

This story is awesome!

Dude! This is the first fic around here (that I have seen) that show such a realism within Nerv. Equipament lacking, untrained pilot, unprepared crew, it is so new to see it shown like that. Please keep up the good work.

Great Story. Simply Fantastic.

Well written. And exciting to read!

Simply amazing.

I Love your story.

LOVE it.

:)

Awesome. It's been a while and I'd actually lost the link to your stories for a bit there, but it was great finding your profile again and seeing that I'd missed an update.

Great chapter. Poor Shinji just can't catch a break. He is just getting a handle on his emotional trauma (maybe, I guess there hasn't been enough time since Misato's talk with him to really tell) and now he is going to be on the sick list for weeks/months.

Anyway. I loved the characterization and the little cracks about becoming a comic-book hero. Also the nurse ]. It's amusing to see that not only is he starting to act like a comic-book hero, but people are starting to treat him like one, sort of.

I wonder about Rei. Worry about her too, since Gendo tends to not like any deviations in her character.

Looking forward to more. This is approaching epicness and I can't wait until it achieves it.

The same goes Something to Die For. (I'm not familiar with the other series.)

Thanks for writing.

Cheers!

Well this is excellent, I'm very glad I took the time to read it and even happier that you took the time to write it.

I like the gradual development of characters, it feels somewhat believable.

Nice story. A little change and already several things are different. Keep it up