Hey
I loved your story. It was beautifully written, slow going, but not without drama.
Kandas emotions and reasons were not only in character, but also clear in theire origin. You could understand him and his motives perfectly, even if you did not agree.
Thank you for sharing :)

For a yullen fic, i find it absolutly flawless in the "not OOC" department. Great job here !
As a french reader, i found it particularly easy to read, and awesome in is narration.

This is straight up just the best Kanda I've ever read and I've been reading all the recent Yullen fics. Really it's just beautiful. I can totally see Kanda like this and I know from experience KANDA'S IS SUCH A $!% TO WRITE! The way you portrayed him though was just spot on! Like perfect! It's as if you created him! Which I know you didn't but still I'm amazed by how in character he is here like seriously. I seriously love how you keep bringing up how it wasn't love because whether or not if it was actually love or not Kanda would probably keep denying it anyway and say it was something else.

I thought it was very nice. Keep writing! :D

This is great... I love how you portrayed Kanda in this fic. It's absolutely wonderful! It's so cold and so Kanda-like-ish but it's still amazing, :) i love it.

Um, that was kinda sad but at the same time...
ADORABLE! WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Wow... this is wonderful! . I really love it! I'm surprised that you managed to write a one-shot this long and enjoyable without any dialogues! I think Kanda isn't OOC in the slightest You really potray their connection deeply; their relationship seems very probable and acceptable! XDD

Great job! (d)(b)

That was wonderful! :)

and beautiful.. did I mention beautiful?

Awesome job! :D

I don't see how this is 'Drama/Angst'

It seems more like friendship and also maybe hurt/comfort

Never-the-less, I still like this fic!

Awesome one-shot!

Your Kanda matches with my head canon of Kanda fairly closely. My Kanda admits he feels a little a bit more, but your interpretation is as valid as mine, and you write Kanda well. It is clearly Kanda Yuu.

Anyway, your Allen/Kanda interaction is spot on. This story flows well, and has wonderful characterization and everything is just so clear. It really deserves more love.

That was such an amazing story! It was the only thing keeping me going through the day! I'm such a Kanda... *gloom* but I love Kanda! And you did a wonderful job of putting him into character! This story us one of my favorites! But you spell Rabi, Lavi and you spell Linali, Lenalee. Hehe! 3

Well, on what I think of this pairing: I love it. Not just romance (because it's usually overdone and badly portrayed) but heavy friendship, and companionship and what-not. But this story... Wow. It was so well done, so in character, it's hard to believe. It's hard to find stories like this, especially between Allen and Kanda, but you wrote one with such excellence - I'm in awe. I adore this story, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Really, really well done.

This is both beautiful and bittersweet. I like how this is from Kanda's perspective. He tells a love story without a rosy-tint.. or rather without much love at all. :)

wow that was a really cute fic!

I like Kanda and Allen. They are just a hoot. They just seem like total opposites.

I think you wrote them well.