*grins*

very simple.

and very good.

i love the last part.

Ritsuka is such a troubled chracter.

and i love when writers portray him right.

i just love this whole fic

you a great writer

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I loved it. I really think you have captured his character wonderfully.

That was great, I liked how true it is. Without pain, (much like the Zero's) we could die so easily. I've felt like Ritsuka in your fic, but I thought almost the same way. (I've named my constant pain XD)

aw...

*dies from cuteness*

that was great

aw. that was sweet. in a way. and that is true; if you take away pain, you take away a lot of other things also. good story.

Ooh, that was really good. I loved how the end tied in with the beginning paragraph. Yay.

Beautiful! Keep it up!