Good story!

you're story is already finished but I'll take the time and leave a quick review for you here. overall the idea if the story was nice and also exciting but you could work on writing longer and a bit more complex chapters. look forward to read more of you.

Jesus, this is poorly written.

Cute story. Anakin and Padme are so sweet.

Bahahahahah! Oh, poor Anakin is in for it. The cravings are just the beginning. Wow, he’s smart to keep his mouth shut.

I'm reading this like 5/6 yrs later and I think it is rally good! Just plz practise on ur spelling- daighter should be daughter XP
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tbh your writing is really shitty but this plot is kinda good

Who the fuck is vador i hate it when people say my name incorrectly. Like dark vader. No it is DARTH VADER for fucks sake. Huff-puff.- - okay. I've calmed down. I didn't particularly hate your story but could've been better. A lot better. And i also find your lack of faith disturbing. Have a sith day.

This was a great story and I loved reading it! I actually think you could write a sequel where the galaxy starts putting itself back together and maybe Anakin could try to start a new jedi order. It would be fun to read but it's just an idea.

You have a good plot here, but it really needs polishing.

Very enjoyable story

:( good idea but I can't get my head arround vader talking like that i'll keep reading

lol, dis chapter was brilliant. i loved it and laughed so much

tbh, it would of been nice to see padme being atleast A bit debatable, like -a-bitch-please moment :) aha, i am scared to click on the next chapter, as it would probs be the most awks moment e.v.e.r

I could feel the awkward tension from here. ahaa imagine it? I am so lucky i am not in her place, i would probably die of boredom and fricking awkwardness :);

Btw i expect that he isn't wearing the suit that darth vader wears, and that he looks normal with his sexy longish hair and them blue eyes :).