| Reviews for Betrayals and Endings |
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   an00626 chapter 2 . 5/16/2019 Nice. Like the marshmallows good way to show it doesn't matter |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/26/2017 Loved this story! |
| jules3677 chapter 2 . 5/17/2015 Your story had the perfect intensity for the topic. Most impressed with your writing. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/18/2014 good story, thanks for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2014 i hope she still doesn't read it. I though Joe broke the law to get those files. |
| babesrus2 chapter 2 . 11/16/2014 So, well written, and (sigh) so many years ago. I missed it but I know about it now. Stephanie knew her man and what it took to be the man he is now. Excellent short. |
| deviates322 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014 Great story! Thanks |
| Ybanormlmom chapter 2 . 6/11/2014 Absolutely love that last line! |
| highlands girl chapter 2 . 4/6/2014 Beautiful story ... just the right blend of tenderness and angst with a touch of silliness. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/16/2014 Good story. I especially liked those last few lines. |
| bgrgrmpy chapter 1 . 2/16/2014 Omg bravo Stephen for not reading it. For knowing it should be destroyed. |
| margaret aka whymelucylu chapter 2 . 8/3/2013 beautiful...ending and all |
| carrotmusic chapter 2 . 4/25/2013 So well done. So hard to imagine someone getting hold of that whole classified file - but the marshmallow roast was just perfect. Thanks for sharing and take care. |
| Caro chapter 2 . 11/29/2012 Oooooh! This one was good. I loved all of it. Perfect |
| Bambu chapter 2 . 9/8/2012 I realize this has been posted for years, but let me just say how much I enjoyed reading it today. You've done a very nice job with all three characters, and Stephanie's symbolic message was delivered perfectly. |
