thanks for sharing. sad yet a good story. keep up the good work! :)

Well, here i am, it's cold and windy so I decide to read a bit and i come across this piece. Ah, so sad I must say but I still loved it. I'm such a sucker for sad endings.

Anyways anywho, just thought you should now.

Leaving now, Buh-bye.

A sad story. I liked it a lot. I hate sad endings though. Can you make it a happy one?

that was so sad! i love the way you write, really fluid.

great story. i liked it a lot, makes me remember my recent break up. well l8r

It made me cry...I really love the depth you put into the story. I hope you maybe could make more to this sotry? Maybe have him try and get Shu back? But if you don't want to and leave it like this it will still be great. Good job! Can't wait to read more of your work!