Kust about every detail in the story is a mess, ranging from the name of the yondaime which was a common occurance at the time of this story publishing to the details of the story itself.. Such as the mission to wave being the same story only in kiri because the writer can't tell the two apart..

I'm dropping the story because the quality leaves a lot to be desired and the mistakes are too numerous. That said I do see the writer had a fun time writing this as he or she posted dozens of chapters.

I do intend to check if the writer has posted something more recently however because of the enthusiasm he or she has displayed and the over all concept of the story was fun. I hope to see greatly improved writing skills in this authors future.

Thus far the story has an unnatural feel to it. The interactions between characters sound like everyone has autism. That. Said. The concept of the story seems OK thus far but I have no idea what narutos skillet is even after the bell test since it simply has not been written well enough to extrapolate the data...

What I've gathered so far is that he has a scythe or a sickle or something bladed and his usual shadow clones... That's it... It all feels rather disjointed and I got no idea if he's even any good with them or swinging them around in his usual angry toddler style...

That doesn't make sense, Kakashi said they all passed and five seconds later explain that Naruto is the only one worthy of actually passing the test ? Then why did he considered they all passed it ? Clearly neither Sasuke nor Sakura understood the real meaning of the test and didn't show any teamwork at all. As a team, they failed the test and you didn't give us any explanation as to why Kakashi decided otherwise. Was he forced by the Hokage ? Did team 7 remind him of his own team so he let them pass ? Without any explanation I will just assume it was just a cheap trick to have the plot continue and them not going back to the academy as they should.

get your facts straight and then rewrite this story. it could be so much better but i just cant get into it with all the fourth wall busting with shonen jump being in here and all...sorry.

Great story.

somthing is bothery me its saying naruto has a scythe yet in the summery its says he gets a sword last time i check there two diffrent things

"He grabs a pair of ants and puts them on" i think i would like to use pants instead of ants

well haku clan will not die out.

Karachi would have take their head for the bounty on them instead of just burning them alive ,Plus tripped them of they gear you do not waste resources and enemy tech that could be studied and later use to improve your village.

Really three years apart? That is harsh as hell. You don't just split up a couple who just got together for three years...At the very least you should have had her go with him. I don't think I can continue reading knowing they won't be together for three years. :c

What the hell? Why did TenTen hit Naruto? Such a caring and compassionate girlfriend she ended up being .-.

Narutos dads name is Minato not Arashi.

If they were going to tell the Hokage why was there no mention of sealing the curse mark or lifting Narutos seal?

Why the hell did he break Narutos scythe :/ At the very least if they are going to help Haku out then he should buy Naruto a new scythe. Naruto wielding one was pretty cool and original.

since he lost a eye does that mean he will have either a eye-patch or place his headband like kakashi does?