Emotional, hectic, crazy...beautiful

Ok, usually the little mistakes for not being a native English speaker are easily dismissed and I ignore them, but some of them are really glaring.. "What you rip is what you saw." What you mean to say is "you reap what you sow." These are very different, even though they are phonetically similar. Different verbs:
reap/rip and see/sow. Otherwise, love the story and the writing... ;)

Thank you for writing andsharing this story. My first take on CathSara ship.
Aside from couple of typos, it have been a pleasure to read.
Je suis malade, its only I can think of the raw, messy, unyielding and unapologetic romance being potrayed here.
Once again, bravo.

I don't know how you do it, but your stories are always so rich in emotions, storyline, character build...You are an amazing writer

I know its been years since you wrote this story but Im kind of new in csi read every story of yours and scubys to this one and Im amazed by are truly gifted.I usually cant get over your stories easily.I m thinking about them for days.I am a huge fun of Sara and Catherine but in this story I liked Sara and Nansy.I would have really liked them to be together.

NOT HAPPY! :( I want Cath and Sara together, but not at the expense of Nancy! Sigh. Now I must read more!

Please don't kill Nancy! And as much as I'm a Cath/Sara shipper, I totally love seeing Sara in love! So, No dead Nancy! o.o

AHHHHHHHHH. CRAZY!

i know , you write this story 4 yeurs ago! But what the F**K! No come on... sara and nancy so cute. Why always catherine have all... rrrrrrrrrrrr

this is the simplest yet i didn't think of other way for them to break up but nancy to die... yes that's what i've been thinking from all those chaps... but then again i think that would be too easy and tragic... great story though so far :D

What a terrific story:) loed it!

First, thank you once again for sending me those .pdf files as was being a pain. I just finished reading the entire story. I absolutely loved it. I have to say, I've never been one for first person POV written works but I enjoyed this work so much I couldn't stop reading. Thank you for writing this amazing piece.

It might have taken me the majority of a day to read this, but it was completely worth it. You draw characters beautifully and have a lovely and original way with words that captures emotion and poignancy that rarely appears in fanfiction! Most of all, this was a powerfully realistic story. Much as I hated the storyline at times, especially when Sara and Nancy ended (!), you managed somehow to make me empathise with the characters. So thank you and honestly, well done.

Awesome job !

Wow! Just... wow! That was intense! ;) Finally!