Why the is it so FUCKING hard to find Good narutema fanfic. I’m so fucking of being A Fucking little annoying loudmouth orange loving ramen eating little cunt why can I just get a more mature I just had to the first chapter and I already know I was it going to like it but if a fucking retard as mc be Guest just you suck dick

Epic fail.. i don't know why i continue to read stories like this... my luck just sucks.. is so hard to find a good NaruTema story plus having twins.. why you left and abandon this? You are so bad.. you are like Akatsuki or like orochimaru.. so bad..

Wow im impresive now. Naruto have an amazing imagination.. such a big and crazy plan.. but maybe this has a good end as well. I think you make Naruto a little too much power just for him. I just can't stop reading this story..

This is a very bad example.. why Naruto hit and punch his own mother face? Thats bad, bad.. i know she deserve a big slap for make some sense in that brain of her but NO by his son! Im sad..

Sakura is a little envyous can you say so? But what she think about six years after Naruto coming ? He is married now and have kids, you kick him out all the time and now you no deserve his love.. fuck you! But WHAT THE HELL... TSUNADE ITS NARUTO'S MOM? Die you abad woman for abandon your son.. this is getting better !

Like our crazy friend Tayuya would say: SO GODDAMNIT GOOD HELL OF A CHAPTER! HAHAHAHAHA. This story is so great my friend..

Jiraiya is always spying on bath houses! You make me laugh so hard because this was so hilarious..

Seriously i enjoy all the chapter.. all the speeches but not Kisame"s death.. he was maybe the most strong Akatsuki member and just Naruto and Temari kill that crazy shark-men? Too much easy to me.. i like to know more about all the jutsus the guys use in the chapter we read..

This is maybe better then the other fic.. i like this soft side of Temari.. but is so much soft.. Tayuya is so stupid and his mouth es totally dirty..

Oh my goddes! I read Wanderers and i really liked that story.. im reading this now and fell totally in love.. im a crazy NaruTema fan..

Man..
Another sappy naruto

Is it that hard to find more mature naruto fanfic?
Always precious people bullshit, grinning like a moron, ramen eating like a street rat, orange maniac, naive epic proportion, hero complex to the core, useless, utherly PATHETHIC trough and trough

Sorry.. Just want to rant :D

great story so far! i am really enjoying myself. however, i think you should have let tsunade stew a little bit more...

i have to admit that this is maybe one of my favorite Naruto fics EVER!

Not only for the romance, the drama and the action, is because we see what Naruto and Temari are capable to do TOGETHER!
IMPRESSIVE FIC, CONGRATULATIONS!

Dude. WTF! The ending for chapter 8 was crazy, you gotta get back to this story.

Yo this story was a hell of a long good one keep it up man. I like what you did at the bottom there preety good. Well good job cant wait to finish it 1 question? Were are they going to go? Fire and wind is out of the option, rock will kill Naruto on sight cause he looks like Minato,based on the time line he hasent met Bee yet, Ami is home to Akatsuki so that leaves Water! Wich isnt a bad chose realy well to troublesomeah wellbye.
JA NE!