Still sexy

Great

Yup. Definitely starving now.

awesome job

I love it! It's inspiring! Its breath taking! Its cold shower worthy!

wow that was hot! hahaha

Loved the ending repartee:

"What exactly...did you have...in mind detective?" - "You."

ConCrit: Perhaps reconsider the usage of "thrusting in two fingers" – especially at the end of this fic it seemed sudden and somewhat agressive for Olivia to do. Using "gently yet quickly she slid her two fingers in" would not have sounded so agressive. It's just that i prefer the 'softer' terms – I think writing can be sexual, passionate, even agressive, without sounding agressive in a negative way. But these are really minor things, I did enjoy the story, that is why i keep reading your stuff :p

good choice for dinner. well done.

Great oneshots so far... nice and smutty! Keep up the good work.

so good! i loved Lunch, and this was just as good! great job!