Fantastic! Especially Death being no normal man.

If Pia and Uwe would really act it out, this would be uncomfortable to Uwe. He is gay.

Wow. What an amazing oneshot. I'm really in love with your writing. 3

I love Death and Elisabeth. Is it weird for me to love a musical and its characters when I haven't even watched it completely? I just watched some random videos on youtube. lol But I'm so in love with it. I liked the metaphor you used, Death is so seductive. Well, played by Uwe Kroeger, I mean. 3

I love this! It's absolutely wonderful! I think you're really amazing with keeping the characters in-character, and especially keeping the language of the actual musical, you know what I mean? It has this same beautiful poetic sound to it. And I love how you portrayed her inner struggle! And the idea with them being able to make love but not kiss on their mouth is wonderful! Amazing job! Thankyou so much for sharing!

Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this! Please, please, please write more! Your writing kept me on the edge of my seat. I love the weird love story between der Tod and Elisabeth.

Added to my fave's!

amazing! I loved it!

I must say, for a first go, this is incredible. Especially taking into the account of the author's age, the writing level is extraordinary. I love the need, and the game surrounded in the love making, but also the coldness and shades of darkness incorporated as well. It surely was reading art, and appreciated it quite a bit!

Cheers!

It's great to see SOME fiction on Elizabeth! And even better, Death/Lizzy stuff! That was really quite moving! Poor Death had more than he bargained for when he took on Elizabeth hehehe. Maybe you should turn this into a feature length story? I know I'd read it!

Hint: Turn this into a longer story of else 0XD

First of all: Yay! I'm so glad to see more Elisabeth fan fiction.

I really enjoyed that. A cat and mouse game is exactly what they are playing!