Reviews for Harry Potter the Power Unknown |
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bigwoof chapter 21 . 7/22 Excellent story!? Thanks.. |
HoneyBear84 chapter 21 . 6/15 Loved it |
Noy chapter 12 . 5/8 Hermione and Ron coming into the story really felt artificial, if Harry wasn't stupid he would aknowledge that being close to people introduce to him by Dumbledore was incredibly risky and present little to no benefit to him and this aura BS to try to justify it was cringeworthy and dumb, because even if their aura is "clean, bright and good" (I just cringe again) it wont stop Dumbledore from manipulating them to his advantage so innocent or not, being close to them is a stupid decision for Harry. Not to mention, how are they even friend with one another in the first place ? Harry wasn't there and I don't see Ron and Hermione becoming friends without him. |
Absolem Snape chapter 3 . 4/20 I'm sorry, but this mistake hurts my eyes too much... It's GrYffindor not Griffindor |
JavaLADY4084 chapter 1 . 2/5 This was an amazing story and I am only sorry it took until now to stumble across it. An amazing story by a talented writer. Thank you for this gift. |
halleberry1995 chapter 21 . 12/4/2019 BRILLIANT! Also hi, fellow indian :D your writing rocks! |
WeisseHex chapter 21 . 11/30/2019 Such a beautiful story! Thanks! |
WeisseHex chapter 8 . 11/29/2019 Hopefully Harry was able to learn Occulency! |
WeisseHex chapter 5 . 11/29/2019 Was that Mrs. Flamel? |
WeisseHex chapter 3 . 11/29/2019 I'm confused as to why Sevvie had to wait until Harry was 9 years old? WHY?! |
Cwhit930 chapter 21 . 9/3/2019 What a good clean story. Wow the story change with Albus was crazy. You did well with the explanation of the slight inconsistency to make the plot slowly reveal. Thank you for the share and hope to see more works for yours. |
darkwish3 chapter 1 . 8/15/2019 The end actually made me cry :) |
Lady Keiko Niwa chapter 10 . 5/29/2019 your writting style is very broken |
JustARandomFandomer chapter 21 . 12/19/2018 That was a bittersweet ending |
JustARandomFandomer chapter 10 . 12/17/2018 CALLED IT |