Hello! So Ive spent the past two days reading this story, and found it even better than I initially thought it would be. I could hardly put it down, but alas "the job" and "sleep" obnoxiously got in the way. Even now as I write it is currently 3am (on a weekend thank goodness) but I decided I'd write this while its still fresh in my mind.

I will admit, the shift from Ginny and Daisuke's near constant, we must prepare and set up defences against krad! , to pretty suddenly where its barely mentioned or worried about at all was a bit confusing. Of course I know that it hasn't been completely forgotten, and especially Satoshi is worried and actively researching and gathering intell on Krad. It just feels like its fallen to the wayside, not that i don't blame them, I wouldn't envey Dai's workload in the slightest. That said I find I'm enjoying this even more than the beginning. very interested to find out the truth behind the story

You're very good at writing action scenes. All of the chase scenes, the train, krad and daisuke, and especially the escape from the Louvre museum. It was very well composed and the characters actions felt natural and in character. many times i felt on edge of my seat!

wow, the reveal that Satoshi is gay, took me by suprise, but after the bathroom scene and a few others I cant believe I didnt see that coming. At first I thought you were going for eventual RisaxSatoshi but this is good, I'm really liking how their dynamic is playing out, its really nice. I look forward to hopefully some wing-woman Risa~

I think thats all I have to say, I'm nearly about to fall asleep so I better finish this up. I know its been, 4 years? since the last update, but I've dropped a fave and a follow so you can be assured that I'll be back if and whenever you post an update. I will certainly be thinking about this cannon more on my own over the next few days at least!

less-than 3 and, Thank You,Silverinfinity

superb!~~~ superb!~~~

This is a really good story.

I'm so happy I found this story! You've done a great job blending both fandoms and keeping all the characters in character too! :) I've spend the best part of my Sunday reading this fic and I'm very happy I did! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!

Happy ten year anniversary of this story! I'm so glad you haven't given up. And your chapters are still as amazing as always!

Hello! I just found your work and I couldn't stop reading it. Really fun to read but u break my heart QuQ I thought you were a SatoRisa shipper for a while back there but hueeee quq anyhow, great read. Still hoping you would update this. The image of Satoshi using his intricate brush instead of a wand has quite an appeal to me :D

Alana: Poor Daisuke... this will be MUCH more dangerous.
Alyssa: No duh.
Alana: That's my line... :(
Alyssa: -.-

I thought he was from japan

Love it! Will there be SatoshixRisa? Update soon!

Um... Just thought I'd point this out.. It's 'Lacrosse' not 'La Crosse'. Generally, it's just referred to as 'lax' because the 'x' is a cross. I play the sport at school, so I am pretty sure about this.

Hahaha, when I read that, though, I was just like 'Whoah! Recognition!'

I have never read DN Angel, but I suspect there is some form of embarassing story in the manga concerning lacrosse... or the very, very short skirts that all girls wear when playing it. In America, though, playing lacrosse is more of a boy's thing than a girl's thing..

Loving the story. Just a small point with the earlier German. You say (I think) "Kannst Du mir einen..."
I *think* that 'du' here should not have a capital letter. In fact, I'm close to certain. And I dunno, just speaking German, I would normally say, "Kannst du bitte mir einen..." the 'bitte' means please. That's just what I'd say, though.

All the best,

-Kaputt

so cool

•0• cool!

Don't get lost Wiz!

Koool!

Wow