This is such a delight to read I haven't been happier to read something like this the ending really warms my heart. I love this so much thank you for writing this.

Jak can be the new mama flut flut omg TTUTT~

TTUTT~ where has this been all my life?! WHY AM I JUST DISCOVERING THIS CROWN JEWEL FANFIC NOW!?

The bloopers are fucking amazing, and you know that the raccoon bit would have been canon as hell. But damn the banter in this fic is amazing!

THE FUCKING END NOTES MAKE MY DAY!

Daxter is the world's biggest tease EVER! X'D POOR JAK! and don't worry Dax... Pretty soon turn about will be fair play~

X'D Daxter just saw the two skeletons in the closet banging just beautiful and dear gawdz this is hilarious

TTUTT~ that last pun had me in tears just... Just beautiful

TTUTT~ TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH DAXXIE-BOY! but lol Tess is the best... But I wouldn't be caught 9 feet from her mouth lol

(Cackling dolphin noises) HOLY *WHEEZE* SHIT! X'D TESS GIVING *COUGH, COUGH* HEAD! TTUTT~ And the following question of JAK! GIVING JINX HEAD! X'D dead inside just, this was fucking beautiful every single one of their secrets was beautiful just (dies laughing again)

It seems like Jak has some severe anxiety going on. Poor baby. This has got to be one of my favorite chapters of this amazing story.

The fact that Daxter was literally scared of a boner made me die of laughter. XDDDD

Awwwh 3 this whole story was amazing (: I enjoyed reading every minute of it! Great ending to

This story is amazing. I loved every second of it. Ot was funny, and cute, and angsty, everything a good bl story needs. :) I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you. X)

Hello! I just found this yesterday, but it was so interesting that I'm afraid I neglected to leave any reviews - I just wanted to read the next chapter! Seriously, this has been hilarious and pretty good about being in-character, and it's been great reading. Would you mind sending me the link to that other version as well?

: )