Ehh ok story but no continuation.

Ok I am really enjoying this story so far. With Zetsu's early appearances I wonder how long it will be till the Akatsuki show themselves. Anyway keep up the good work

The third mizukage was tobi/obito. The genjutsu controlled fourth was yagura. Zabuza tries to kill yagura.

I know who the guy with black and white features,i think it Zetsu of the CORRECT ME IF I'M WRONG

Awesome story yo

Um, are you gonna finish?

Like the idea and the characters, especially this version of Kisame. Hope to see you continue and see how Naruto's skill set grows.

Interesting first chapter, I hope the romance between Naruto and Haku starts soon :)

Looks good!

good story im curious to see whats going to happen but isn’t naruto a little out of picture I thought he was going to be the main character but it seems zabuza and haku are.

if i was naruto i would be like damnit itachi why is it everytime i see you i fall unconcious

i like it but im sad its not finished *pouts*

"Oh no I don't like them very much but I don't hate them." Man you are such a dreaming pussy!

Fuck what the Series said there's no way in HELL ANYONE can be sane after that treatment and your a real blind dumbass for thinking it's possible.

This is a good fic. Please update it soon.

I find it a little off in the way u portray the kids.

Their 6-7 right, so they should be acting more like that then 12 year olds. Also I find the fact that the adults arnt all impressed that 6 year olds can do these things warrants an explanation. But still interesting job with this Fic.