| Reviews for First Person Plural |
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epifonia chapter 14 . 7/13/2016 This is really quite a beautiful story with such an interesting perspective! I'm a diehard 2x1 fan searching for stuff with DID (as a sort of constructive study break b/c I'm studying psych disorders), I couldn't believe how perfectly your story fit what I was looking for. I really enjoyed it, so if you're still on ffnet I just wanted to say thank you! |
wild wolf free17 chapter 14 . 7/31/2010 This is quite fascinating. |
Inuyasha502000 chapter 14 . 7/29/2010 Oh man, it has certainly been a while since I've read any Gundam Wing fanfics. I remember reading this maybe 3 years ago and reading it again makes me realize how freakin' awesome this is! I noticed that this hasn't been updated in a long while. TT Hopefully u plan to finish, or at least continue it. I am eagerly awaiting any updates! |
kindigo chapter 9 . 6/14/2009 "Heero tuts – Heery Yuy actually freakin’ tuts. Who the hell tuts? Heero Yuy, apparently" and "Heero calmly hands me some more tissues. Damned psychotic Boy Scout." Duo's crying like a waterfall in this highly dramatic moment but all I can do is laugh my ass off! But then I go back to sympathizing. With maybe a little giggling. |
liljenny chapter 14 . 1/1/2009 too bad even after your edit you lost interest. Well I look forward to updates if you ever get back into the swing of FF |
Sunago chapter 1 . 8/22/2008 I really loved reading this. The story is so well written and interesting, I can't wait for you to update it! |
CircleKV12 chapter 14 . 10/29/2007 I love this story. I mean love. I cannot wait for the next chapter! I like need to find out what happens next! Please update soon! |
Terra chapter 14 . 3/14/2007 This story strongly parallels the novel, "First Person Plural" by Cameron West. The title was what first drew me to this story. Your portrayal of Duo's dilemma is engrossing, vivid and at times, heart-wrenching. As the reader, I almost felt like I was one of Duo's alters myself, except as an idle observer. That's how strong your writing is and I simply cannot wait for your next set of updates. Since I have read Dr. West's novel, I can already guess what Meyer's problem is and just why Heero's touch disturbs him so much, but I'll leave it to you to surprise me. I only have two caveats: 1) since this story takes place during the series, there's a discontinuity in your premise for them all living at a safehouse. While you certainly do justify their being together very well, as opposed to many fanfic writers who just have them shacking up for no reason whatsoever, I felt that your elaborate explanation didn't quite cover all the bases. During the show, not once do the scientists ever have the pilots collaborate. When they do end up on the same mission, it is always a coincidence and simply a way for the scientists to ensure success by having a back up. To my knowledge, the five are never gathered together purposefully, in terms of contacting each other and setting up a hit, until the very last of the episodes. My second caveat is that since this does take place during the series, it'll be awfully interesting to read your explanation for why Heero doesn't act remotely affectionate towards Duo near the end of the series. If anything, the last episodes devote most of his time to fighting Zechs and spending time with Relena. Despite that, I'm very glad that you've already finished this series and are only rewriting/editing, because I know you will give us readers closure. I look forward to that. |
Moogie Moe chapter 3 . 3/14/2007 I likes it! |
Mystic Dragonsfire chapter 13 . 12/9/2006 I didn't think you where going to continue with this story. I'm so glad that you have. I apologize if you have been writing and I'm out of line, but I was just by chance that I came across your story again and I'm so very happy that I did |
tyeke chapter 13 . 12/6/2006 BY THE GODS! YOU UPDATED this is like one of my favorite stroies been waiting a long time for an update thanks |
Amy chapter 13 . 12/6/2006 I like the way Heero is slowly, carefully feeling his way through. And giving Duo space. I'd like to see the journal session, actually. I think there's going to be some rather intense negotiation about what is ok to do and what is not. Thanks for sharing! |
Zuzanny chapter 13 . 12/3/2006 Very cute. made me giggle. So glad to see this chapter up! :) |
Daira chapter 13 . 12/3/2006 it's so great to see new chapter from you! keep going! |
Fate T. Nekoi -Angel Orie chapter 13 . 12/3/2006 I wonder what will be the reactions of the others if they find out Duo's little secret. And who exactly is the one (or ones) that doesn't like Heero (or men)? We didn't quite catch that... Meyer maybe? Oh, and congratulation for the plot. You really made an accurate description for Duo's condition. Continue soon! |