Write more! I saw art of this On devainart and I just found this on here thankfully. I want more and so do the rest of us. Write more please.

! DX IT'S SO AMAZINNNGGGG! :P

Update Update update! I love this story! Can't wait for more! XD XD XD XD XD

Sai kun

o u going to update i love this!

It's very good. :D I'm adding it to my favorites because my sister thinks I have no rights to the computer, though I HAPPEN to be older... Enough of my troubles though... I'll finish this story as soon as possible, because it looks really good so far! XD CAN'T WAIT!

Curiosity compels me.

I am most intrigued.

KUDOS FOR YOU! I love this story. Update asap

It's been a while, but I really hope you update this story. I think the idea of Ben transforming into something like Kevin and needing his help is a really great plot and you're doing a fantastic job with it. :) And Ben's reflections about his own cruelty were spot on; it hurts to even hear that part of the episode, so I liked that you incorporated the flashbacks, and it was a good move having him realize how awful what was said to Kevin was. Anyway, great job so far and I hope to see this story updated in the future!

I'm not usually a fan of Ben 10 fictions, but...I like this. D: I want to see more. And, I've got a question - what are their ages in this fiction? I'm a little confused.

Keep going -

When are you going to update this story because this is one of the best Bevin stories ever! I am DYING to know what is going to happen to them because I feel for both of them & I wish I can help you coming up with ideas! If you need help, here's my email:

I'm glad I read this, 'cause it has a very decent plot, and with how the watch was acting up and how Ben thinks that Kevin can save him from what he's becoming and all that. Please update soon, I wanna see if Ben will actually get back to normal or not. Please...if you update...I'll be the happiest reviewer in the world *puppy-eyes*

I love it, wouldn't change a thing.

Wow...O.O This is so good! I love it! This story just kept me on the edge the entire time and i liked how you put in how the characters progress and there inner turmoil! Brilliant, i cant wait to read more!

PRETTY PLZ UPDATE ASAP OR ELSE A BOSSY MOOSE WILL RUN YOU OVER!

~Wuv the Playfulness*

i like this story a lot. its been a while since you updated it, but i hope you will soon! please? ill check in later. Ja Ne!