| Reviews for Smiles |
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   Meicdon13 chapter 1 . 12/8/2007 While I was reading the almost-rape scene, I had the most horrible mental image of Nii Jenyi molesting Goku. And I am trying to ignore the half of my brain that approves of said mental image. The entire thing is extremely cute o But I have to say, the last part about the fangirls is my favorite. A few typos and errors here and there, but nothing a good beta can't fix. Good job! |
| windwhisprer chapter 1 . 4/9/2007 This was sweet. The highschool thing had been done and used, thrown out back and left for the crows to pick at. But the way you used the snipbits; snapshots of their lives made it original and your own. The Goku-Sanzo sleeping arangements made me giggle. Those two together is just too cute. And I loved the almost-rape scene. I'm a sadist and I know it. xD There were only a few grammer and punctuation errors, but nothing overly painful. Good work. -Windy |
| AlfredisMyHero chapter 1 . 4/2/2007 god plz tell me tht this is not a 1 shot!It could get billions of reviews! |
| Miss Goku chapter 1 . 3/26/2007 cute, very cute |
| milkteethbabydoll chapter 1 . 3/25/2007 *fangirl scream* Yay! I loved this fic! It had a great ending too. 3 |
| strawberrydevil chapter 1 . 3/19/2007 ahahaha...ahahaha...good story! |
| Yami Adritha chapter 1 . 3/19/2007 Aw, that one was cute! I liked it. The fangirls at the end were the best! XD |
