Reviews for Spring Break
nejiXtenten4everz chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
eh!

so cute i love Loliver (did you notice the "love" in the word Loliver although there's also "liver" and "live" and "lol"and ... ) but 4 real great! STORY! LOVE IT
GreenRules95 chapter 9 . 2/7/2008
loved it from begining to end!
firecaughton chapter 9 . 12/15/2007
eep another cute story by Mari!

loved it
thesoundofsunshine chapter 9 . 8/27/2007
that was pretty cute...kudos!
Silly Lilly chapter 9 . 6/28/2007
aw! I loved this story! you should've kept going! lol. :)

AWESOME job on this one! I really loved it! :)
Silly Lilly chapter 6 . 6/27/2007
aww! That ending was so sweet! :) i have to stop reading today... so yeah... Im going to finish the story tomorra! :)
countingsheep chapter 1 . 5/16/2007
Don't have enough time to read this, but I will tomorrow. Good first chapter though.
xforgottenxcrystalxdestinyx chapter 9 . 4/17/2007
agghr!

frekin perfect!

wen oliver and lilly were close to each other i cud literally feel the passion between them and any author that can make their readers feel emotions like that must be an awsome author!

xcellent story :)
marchingbandfreak chapter 9 . 4/17/2007
aw, cute!
Dancerles1 chapter 9 . 4/7/2007
a great ending to an amazing story...i loved it! :)
simplypink chapter 9 . 3/30/2007
Aw great way ending it!

every chapter was worth waiting for!

can't wait for more of your stories!

:D
ChasingMyDreams chapter 9 . 3/30/2007
great job loved the story
sherrie123456 chapter 9 . 3/29/2007
aw that was SO good! I loved it. haha jake made me laugh at the end too. it was super good.
Valx3 chapter 9 . 3/29/2007
omg! i cannot, like, get over how cute this wass! it was so adorable, and I loved every word of it! great job ]
Alissyn chapter 9 . 3/29/2007
Wow. That was totally adorable. Hahahaha I think its funny Lilly thinks Oliver is 'hott'. XOXO love the story! so cutee.

- alissyn
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