A very interesting guardian for Dean.

OK, whatever that thing is that was looking at Dean, it officially creeps me out. Was it a bad thing that happened to keep Dean alive, or a good thing that was helping him on purpose?

I live alone - I can't read scary things!

CB

Hey, kamelion -

thought I should check you out. Thought I'd start with the first SN story you'd posted out here.

Glad I did.

Love the homage to the throwbacks of the old "it was a dream... but there was scratches all over the door. Did it really happen?" and the figure melting away at the end.

The creature, although we don't ever really see it, is very creepy. Love how you describe it as being different than the night, more complete.

Great job, enjoyed it!

"His dad was by his side, comforting him, telling him it was okay, it was only the tree outside blowing in the wind, that there was nothing to be afraid of. Part of him never forgave his father for that lie. His mother died the next night."

Oh, wow. Nice punch.

Freaky eerie scary the whole way through. Well done.

Creepy, and lovely! You kept the tension going very well. I HATE faces/shadows at windows!

Cathy.

Creepy, incredibly creepy. Fantastic tension.

I really do hope you continue writing Supernatural.

I just found this and loved it! Dean's head is a scary, scary place. Good work!

Good one. Great job.

Nice ending! I was really expecting that the cold had gotten to Dean and it was just Sam outside, not a monster. Good twist.

CREEPY!

very very good

Interesting.

Great story and I'm glad you joined in SN fan fic. I hope you stay! I loved the twist, didn't see it coming. Really well written and I could really feel the tension.

Ooh creepy! Well done!

Nice story! I liked it alot!

I loved this! Excellent work!