Great team adventure and I really enjoyed seeing Teyla focused on more in this one!

I'm not sure if I've read this before, but if I have, it's been a long time and I don't really remember it. That being said, I loved this! The John/Rodney banter is absolutely perfect! You have all the characters down pat. Teyla feeling helpless during the boat/hovercraft escape is very realistic, as is her subsequent desire to learn more about how things work. Her reactions when Rodney was snapping at her in the broken jumper were so true, and I loved John standing up for her. This was such a great combination of action, character development, and intrigue. Very nicely done!

Have read this story three times and it is still wonderful.

Loved this! The team dynamic and especially Rodney’s and Teyla’s were fun to ’watch’. Thank you.

great fic

Wow! Great story! Loved how this wasn't just the typical gen. action story;really enjoyed seeing Teyla taking a greater role instead of just being part of the team. I liked how you set up her desire to learn more about Rodney's line of work in the early part of the story. I always figured Teyla had a keen mind but the writers never developed that idea (while overdeveloping other ideas that killed the show). *iz a proud whumper* The team's whump was awesome,both phyiscal and emotional. *snickers* The image of Biro and Ronon studying was hysterical and Rodney asking Teyla to help him study a new device was sweet. Great job on a fic well done. Cheers! }:O

Raven

Thankyou so much for writing this! I really enjoyed it. You write so well, the characterizations are perfect, I can imagine them saying those things in my head. I was actually even shaking at some points in the story from excitement, I needed to read more. Really great job! Keep writing, please! I'll be going to read more of your stories! :-)

That's awesome! Brilliant! I love how Rodney came and asked Teyla to come and study the device with him in the end and I also love how Ronon is studying stuff too now. I actually quite liked this Teyla centered fic. I wish this issue had actually been addressed in the show. Awesome story!

Awesome fic! I love it! I love how Teyla is one of Rodney's scientists! This is such a cool story! The characterization is awesome. I find it funny she wants to be Rodney!

I love this story, but so far I have enjoyed this chapter the most. Rodney's nose comment took me completely by surprise and the ensuing conversation was fantastic. I am so glad I happened on this story. I know it was written 3 years ago, but I am new to this site and have found many of the authors spot on with characterization. I feel like I have new episodes to enjoy even without the series. Actually, I've enjoyed your story much more than some of the published Stargate Atlantis books. I look forward to reading more of your stories (and finishing the current one)!

That was fantastic! So fast-paced that near the end when the Kaveer approached the jumper my heart was racing, I'm not kidding. 'Never Stop Moving' describes it well :).

I loved Teyla's development of learning new skills, and it felt perfectly in character for her. I particularly liked her realization that in the field she wouldn't have to be Zelenka, she'd have to be Rodney... no time for painstaking, by-the-book diagnostics. Great character stuff, too... Rodney treating her like a minion, and being hurt that she went to Zelenka, and Teyla *reacting* like one of his minions, and being bemused by her own reaction. Wonderful team interaction all around.

Will rec ASAP. I hope you'll continue to write in this fandom; your stories always bring me joy.

this story is a great story one of the best SGA stories i have read

This was a great story. I really liked this one. Well actually I like most of the SGA stories you have posted here. The way you have the team helping each other and looking out for the members is great. You really expand on the characters and stuff its great. I really liked this one where Teyla decided to expand her learning so she could help the team more and then at the end Ronan also decided to do the same only in a different field. That is wonderful and them both knowing more will only help. thx for posting your wonderful stories and I hope to read more.

That was good. The whumpping was very heavy duty and Teyla's POV was very cool. Can only say nice things about this. Thanks.

Great story