this is a great idea and hope you some day continue :D

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Ok, I like what you've written so far, but why are you taking out Ness, Mewtwo, Jigglypuff, The ice climbers and Mr. Game and watch? And why not just include all the additional Brawl characters?

this is a pretty good crossover between Naruto and super smash bros, it's too bad that you haven't updated in awhile but I don't mind waiting since this is an awesome story.

anyway about the naru/saku pairing, I don't exactly hate sakura, more like apathetic, I really don't care much for her but I was kinda hoping for a different pairing but it's your choice, I'm just making a suggestion.

You cannot remove jugglypuff and ness. They were in the first smash bros!Removing them would be like removing mario from the mario sereis, or zelda from the zelda series!

great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.

No, your right. Hidan's scythe would fit perfectly in a Devil May Cry game.

Is Zelda going to be like a older sister to Naruto? No offense but I'm not a NaruSaku fan (unless in a harem). Be funny if everyone in the elemental nations were watching. Mei (5th Mizukage) would think Naruto's cute, E (Raikage) would think he's a brat, a strong brat but still a brat, Gaara would be silently cheering, and Onoki (3rd Tsuchikage) would know he's Minato's son just because Naruto looks like Minato. Never mind Orochimaru, Akatsuki, Tazuna's family, Princess Koyuki and the others would think.

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Nice story. What will Naruto's Final Smash be?

I love your plot but you must be more diligent in your grammar and syntax. By the way pier is another name for dock and peer is someone you know. Good luck with the rest of your story. Update rapidly, please.

you have a few mistakes, you should revise it and then repost it. Very nice concept, I also wish to do a crossover between these two, though not with your plot. Good luck with your writing.

sounds cool

Good story so far. Why don't you make it so Naruto impressess everyone, and they give him some shred of respect? Also why arn't you up dating?

Nice! Now... I think that Mew Two should be eliminated as he's just too strong for his own good. I mean, he's a freakin' psychic! Also, a question, how many opponents shall Naruto face? Furthermore, when will you update next and will you make the next chapter longer than this one?

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hope you continue this soon also if you have legend of zelda twilight princess you should have midna and other charecters from that game show what think when naruto will (might?) fight link or zelda as well as charecters from other games thoughts on the fights. it would be interesting to read

i got a reason, true this could become narusaku but its highly unlikely, if they soul search they'd relaise that his crush on sakura is just a passing phase, same with sakura to sasuke, if anything, he'd probably grow an attachment to someone in the tourament, like an OC, cause you can one for a reason you can just make up, besides he be to busy fighting for soul searching and his spare time he'd be reflecting on his realtionships on people