please pick this up again and finish it.
Please...

Nuuuuuuuuu
And it was getting so good! D:
I really hope this gets updated again, awesome story! :)

Update. What is going on at Amory park, do they realize what is going on? R they able to see things as they're happening? Will Danny's secret be revealed? When are other people going to starg finding out about other people's burdens like it dais in the description.

This makes me think of that part in The Chamber of Secrets with all the, well, giant spiders. XD

Noooooooooooooo!

please please please, update!

... Your inability is taking too long. 6 years. Wow. But seriously. Just get someone's POV already. And please, show more Danny. Isn't he the main character? We hadn't seen Danny often. Where is he? I wanna see Danny!

I hope u have a sudden amount of free time and can somehow manage to write this story, or pick it back up after college, cause its really awesome!

Hey, do you realize you haven't updated sense 2009?! WHAT THE HELL?! THIS IS WHAT YOU LEAVE US WITH?! MEANIE!

You haven't updated in four years, but i really like this story and i was hoping you could PM me or something and tell me if you were going to continue. If not, don't bother, but i'd like it if you did continue

If you really needed to you could do third person pov or do a second pov for some of the characters(: looking forward to your next update!

Please please please update this. .. this story is really great and I Srsly love it

Maybe you could make a thing like a tv that Lancer can watch the kids it would be so much more interesting for Lancer

Aw... no more updates?
Pity.
It's an interesting story line.

And you got better with the awful typos.

Dude...
Get a beta.

OR

Reread your chapters out loud before you post.
That way you'll catch all of the GPAs in place of GPSs. Also, try spell check.

Mistakes like that totally destroy the forth wall.