What the fuck did you list this as Jin x Asuka, if the endgame wasn't Jin x Asuka? Fuck you. Your cunt mother definitely regrets not aborting you. But hey, if the crusty bitch is humping some crackheads cock, she might produce a better child than you. You are a pathetic, disappointing failure, and are utterly worthless. A baby that was fucked in her by a scumbag is a much better alternative and replacement to you. You are shitstain through and through

Utter fucking garbage

nice chapter!

its short but nice chapter even if!:)

nice start!:)

;n; that was soooo saddd... TAT my heart... THE FEELLLSSSS! *20 days later* umm.. your story was really good! I hade alot of fun reading them all. I hope to see more of your work.. in your story to see how they first got alone in the doJo and now to the end.. it... it was really cute and loving lol i wish there was more! That story was amazing!

;n; the feels...

Awwe kinda sad its ending.. it was really fun to read

I think i liked this story the most! Because everyone was having fun and it was just really cute hehe poor hwo

keep it upp! :3

030 whats going to happen next! Hehe cant wait to find out

Whoa this was really good! I really hope to see more of your stories! There great

Ohh this looks really good ·3· i hope to see more of your work! Cant wait to read chapter 3

I like all fan fiction about jin and Asuka and I also love to see them like couples

can i please copy ur you please message you give the storyt