it has been 10 years since I read this fic and I still always come back to reading it, I love this one so much that I'll never get bored of reading it

I would love to see a sequel.

You can have Ash and Misty go to Sinnoh. Just outside of Sandgem Town they see a bluenette girl in danger. Ash saves her life and introduces herself as Dawn Berlitz of Twinleaf Town. You can figure out how to write this. When they get to the Pokemon Center, Ash sees Brock and recognizes the lady sitting with him as Pike Queen Lucy. You can do a dual Pokeshipping/ Luckshipping story, and possibly figure out a way for Misty to include Dawn into a three-way tryst for Ash's birthday present. Just a small outline for a potential story. If you need background for the Luckshipping part, look up "Queen of the Serpentine" from the Battle Frontier series. Look at Lucy's reaction to Brock after every time he says something to her.

A classic DAMM DAMM DAA moment;)
Sounds intressting.

This is totally awesome dude! This was truly beautiful. Just that Misty was a little OOC... everything else was perfect

All I have to say is, is daaaaaaaaanng. I feel I haven’t read a good chapter book story about Pokeshipping in the longest time. I really enjoyed the whole premise about Misty’s real family (truth be told it makes sense that compared to Daisy she really seems out of place, plus it’s confirmed that originally it was intended that Daisy, Violet, and Lily have black hair, but the head writer never mentioned why Misty’s hair is orange and not dyed etc.), and about finding out she’s related to Flannery amazingly enough.

And the confession scene was great to read as was the little short drama about Misty’s decision to go to Sinnoh with Ash or not. Great stuff.

I love this its so great did u ever do another?

Sequel please!

Sequel. Now.

that was GREAT! please do some more!

Yas moar.

Great story. Though I think you could have included some late night talks and the grow closer or maybe Misty having a nightmare about what could go wrong and Ash comforts her. And also I think Ash would have been a lot more upset on the idea the Misty wasn't going back with him. But great story (as I've already mentioned), nonetheless

Here are my questions. 1. This fanfic took place before Sinnoh, right? 2. How old was everyone that was in it? 3. What Pokémon were owned by the main characters in the fanfic? 4. How did they get those Pokémon? 5. How long have they owned them for? 6. Out of curiosity, what kind of Gym business were Lily & violet taking care of? 7. How did this half-picture end up at Cerulean City? Be sure to let me know.

nick

Please make a sequel

I like the story, but couples don't kiss every 5 seconds. It would've been nice if you hadn't put "kiss" in every other paragraph, just sayin'