make paragraphs instead of a brick

unless thats just my phone fucking it up, theres no paragraphs, which makes it really hard to read

What is it with these writers who make normal updates then decide to just drop writing without at least an update first. I get it, stuff happens. Some have accidents and cant come back, some might lose access to their accounts, they get too busy and by the time they have time again, they forget or lose motivation in fanfic. But why do some just drop it all and ignore people when still here reading? At least a notice they dont care about continuing their fics would be nice. After years it is kinda obvious they quit, but often I find recently updated fics that suddenly stop getting updated, even after months . And most are those saying "see you next week" or such. They still reading fanfics and they add to their favorites so they havent died or anything.

*LICK*

why you making him leave the vi;;age should have him prove them wrong

Great story

Hey this is like, my 4th time reading this fanfic, and I can't help but notice that you hadn't updated it in a few years... why is that? Is it on indefinite Hiatus, did you abandon it, or have you left fanfiction entirely?

Guest who lost is freaking mind in the reviews below me.

Good freaking lord.

This story is a good ole classic FanFiction for me.

Was it perfect? No... but it had a goal, and that was admirable.

I’ll be honest with you Mr. Guest Sir. Not a lot of authors would want you as a reviewer.

You’re mean.

And then you never updated...

You already have him allying with hanabi, it's A REASONABLE conclusion that fans jump to hinata dumb-ass... You can't have one without the other. It's like sasgay without itachi, it don't WORK!

The mizukage ISN'T OLD (by any stretch of the imagination) and orochi ISN'T STRONG enough to boss him around, that's kiinda LAUGHABLE actually. Kinda like seeing a Chihuahua bullying a Pit-Bull! You gotta laugh and think "he could STEP ON HIM and kill him". Same principal applies, the snake is nearly STUPID in how WEAK he is in comparison to the tailed beasts... He'd get STEAMROLLED! By even the ONE-TAILS.
You don't like hinata? HUH? FUNNY how EVERYBODY ELSE DOES and she IS CANON! What part did you miss? The part with her ONLY EXISTING to be his girl? Or that she played NO PART in absolutely ANYTHING that could get her killed if he wasn't there? Hmmm... Subtle clues like that are easily missed. Maybe the author should bring a SLEDGEHAMMER next time?

The hokage SHOULD have taken the "heat".. Instead of letting naruto suffer, he should have made PUBLIC EXECUTIONS, totally got in the face of ALL CLAN MATTERS, gotten rid of the councils (either by death or KILLING THEIR ENTIRE FAMILIES)... everyone that disagreed with him?... DEAD... (this is NOT an election)... so see? MADE ALL THE HATE go to him, instead of their biggest shield. THAT is what a REAL leader does! He takes the "hit" for everyone else (including their "prince in hiding")... The leaf would have HATED him with a passion, BUT he could have passed the torch to tsunade easily, and kept EVERYBODY off naruto. (and cleaned out his vermin problem) She'd have to "fix" a lot, but she seems almost as senile as him, so this would be easy. (seriously if you MISS danzo? You gotta have alzehemier's)

The hokage is an idiot.. IT"S ALWAYS THE VIZIER... ALWAYS! It's like saying "the butler did it".. It's ALWAYS the the one who speaks to the leader.. EVERY SINGLE TIME... It's cliche' Wanna know who's working against you? The vizier! Wanna know who's HAIR-BRAINED SCHEME will destroy everything?.. The vizier... Wanna know whom I'd put to DEATH for breathing? The vizier.

This chapter was PAINFUL, I don't know how you WROTE IT, it literally took me three days to get through this ONE CHAPTER... I mean dude, some screw ups are allowed (every author makes them) and some are because of a different timeline/world... BUT GEEZ...This was worse then swiss cheese! You REALLY need to research more. Make up your mind! Are the tailed beasts powerful or NOT? Is leaf a moron town or NOT?.. PICK A SIDE for heaven's sake on MOST OF IT! AND STICK WITH IT! Don't like how things are going? Well you can always write another story were they DO! Don't give the reader WHIPLASH in trying to keep up! Naruto can tear apart a NATION (but is somehow cowardly against an 90 year old man).. Naruto can demand obedience from all the tailed beasts! yet somehow the 5 tails is imprisoned by a semi-crippled, retired, old waste of time... He can BEAT S-RANKS! but is worried about people that haven't left the village or trained in the last two decades... This is like him participating in the chunnin exams.. AN UTTER WASTE OF TIME.. AND TOTALLY UNBELIEVABLE! (I hope you don't do that stupidity)

You know in a world of henges, (transform techniques) and genjutsu... I'd THINK people would quit relying on "this person is this age"... I mean look at tsunade... It's really kinda POINTLESS to judge ANYONE on appearances when they can be ANYONE or ANYTHING isn't it? All that kinda goes out the window when a 5 year old can tear apart a 20 year old and a 90 year old can beat an 18 year old in hand-to-hand doesn't it? POWER is the GREAT EQUALIZER here, age, means nothing, sex means nothing... Creed? NOTHING.. POWER (personal power, not political GARBAGE) means EVERYTHING. Those that got it? THEY HAVE IT, those that don't? WONT, it doesn't matter how much they scheme or plot or steal, they just WONT (genetics). Sad but TRUE. Naruto has TRUE power, either from heritage or the universe itself aligning to him, he's got something that CANNOT be duplicated, so it SUCKS to be the ones that didn't see that! (even though all flag markers were flying and it was KINDA OBVIOUS). Maybe you should put a neon blinking SIGN above his head in future stories?

i THINK YOU MISSED A FEW that sarutobi feared: Finding out what a liar he was, uncovering the truth in many things he's done, running out of adult diapers, his old (some would say SHOULD be long in the grave) rival getting the better of him, many, MANY others.