| Reviews for Slumber Party |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 2/23 Please post another chapter it was awesome |
| Plz chapter 11 . 2/10/2017 Plz get a sequel. I lov dis stori |
| Misora Hoshigaki chapter 11 . 2/9/2017 OMG! That was so beautifully perfect. I fell like Suino would've been a bit more tentative with Hinata in the house though. I loved it. Hiashi's reaction was perfect (though I think it would've been funny if Tsunade beat him up) Neji's reaction seemed a bit... Off. I feel like Neji would've battled Shino and tested him to make sure he was worthy of Hinata. I would love it if there was a sequel! So cool! You might want to add a bit if a kidnapping(maybe Shino gets kidnapped, and Hinata breaks out of her usual shy demeanor, getting angry, and then she beats up everyone. Or Hinata gets kidnapped and Shino calmly goes in, beating the living crap out of them.) I like how you put a little bit of a twist on it, and had Hinata break up with Naruto, but what if Naruto comes back? What if Naruto wants to wreck their marriage... What if he tries to do something to poor Hinata? Anyway I shouldn't be telling you what to do with your story... But maybe think about it a little bit? Thanks! Kisame's Daughter, Misora |
| Drowning Shark chapter 2 . 2/7/2017 Cool |
| Chirstian chapter 11 . 12/23/2015 Please wright a lemon |
 cathyscloud9 chapter 11 . 3/14/2015 LOVED IT! Thanks for writing! |
| mary chapter 11 . 11/28/2014 This story was so cute! Their wedding was so cute! It would be great with you did a one shot about their first night, filled with smut! :) It's a shame that i began to read naruto after it ended... shino/hinata is much more cute than naruto /hinata! |
| Kerstie Hansen chapter 5 . 11/16/2014 WTF did you just kill SHINO! dude why... why why why |
| laDetra chapter 7 . 6/6/2014 Omg shiiiiiiiinoooooooo he he he HE KISSED HER!-O |
| LaDetra chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 Omg so good just got finnished with the 1st chapter:-D |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/25/2014 Aw, this has to be the best Shino x Hinata story around. Good job! It was very well written |
| TCRMommaBear chapter 4 . 5/19/2012 Dear God, I have been waiting a LONG TIME for something like that to happen! to ANY FRICKIN CHARACTER COUPLES! YOU JUST MADE MY DAY! *Squee!* |
| BlankInvalidUser chapter 11 . 5/3/2012 Beautiful story. I haven't read many ShinoxHinata fanfics, but I'm very glad I stumbled upon this one. I enjoyed reading it immensely. I especially liked the Gaara parts. They were cute. Gaara certainly has a lot of time on his hands to be in Konoha despite being the kazekage. I think you wrote Shino's character quite well. Actually, everyone seemed to be pretty much IC, which was delightful. I'm glad you didn't turn Hiashi into a jerk as many fanfics seem to do. He may have been strict and restrictive of his emotions in the anime/manga, but he did care for Hinata in his own way, I believe. Anyways, I enjoyed this chapter a lot. The wedding scene was written very well and I LOLed at Tsunade glaring at the audience and silently daring anyone to object, as well as Jiraiya's and Kakashi's attempts to give "advice" to Shino. Cheers to Shino and Hinata! :) |
| xHikari-ice chapter 11 . 2/19/2012 The... sweetest... story... EVER... 3 |
| ali5ma chapter 11 . 12/15/2011 an epilogue would be great if you want to write one |
